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If you want to make a good harem novel, don't add useless women, not to mention that instead of supporting the mc, they seem to bring him problems and selfishly endanger the mc by having an affair with him. Because let's face it where there is a model who lives in luxury wanting to put her life in danger and fight alongside the mc. But if she's going to have a character upgrade and she becomes loyal and truly loves the mc. And she's willing to become powerful by becoming a good partner that's fine then. 😍😍😍

So far I'm not very interested in Vanessa, after all when it comes to Waifus material, a model who knows how many guys she's slept with and especially that phrase of hers about friends with benefits makes her look like a b!tch. The problem is that taking all that into account and adding her forced boyfriend of her. She doesn't seem to care about the mc's safety when having an affair with him, if it is supposed to come from a hidden power that can make people disappear given the apparent fear she has of him, that shows that she is a loose and selfish woman. Either that or that woman is stupid proposing to be friends with benefits. Which also leads me to the fact that this boyfriend of hers doesn't seem to care much about the comings and goings of her fiancee, since it would be easy for him to put an escort or secret guards to protect her supposed girlfriend. Of course it could be that the guy is stupid or he doesn't care about her safety, there's also the possibility that he doesn't care that she sleeps with other guys after all you can't expect much from a model it's not that she is. specifically insulting but we all know what the industry of models and actresses is like.

As regards the most manageable harem so that the girls do not stay in the background, it is an approximate number of 10 to 20 between that number without exceeding. You can have some of the girls form micro groups of friends that get along with each other to be on screen every few chapters accompanying the mc while the others are busy doing some things. In this way, none is forgotten or relegated to the background. By the way among my favorite girls are Jean Grey, Ororo, Mystique, x-23 and maybe the white queen. They are the best when it comes to Waifus.

Chu Yuechan is becoming more and more useless instead of properly recommending Ye Che to make Donfang Xiu his wife so they can take refuge in the fairy gate and buy time for her to recover and strengthen now she tells him to leave her when Chu Yuechan herself does absolutely nothing to help the mc.

In this situation there are not many options for the mc, as it seems that the writer doesn't want the mc to run away using the fairy door, the options are to run away uselessly to be easily captured, to fight bravely even if he is much weaker than his enemies. or pathetically and cowardly surrender, resigning himself to whatever they do to him considering that it seems that they are coming for his celestial flame. So no, he's not behaving badly for a hopeless situation like this. Those who complain about the behavior of the mc, I wonder how they would fare in the same situation considering that this is the first desperate situation of the mc that if they don't remember he is only 19 years old and it has barely been 1 year since he was born cultivator. In this situation, I would have preferred that Chu Yuechan suggested that she hide in the fairy door, but just as she was about to escape, Donfang Xiu suddenly appeared, postponing her escape to see what she intended to do, whether she came with good or bad intentions towards him.

Chu Yuechan is useless, she tells the MC to run away. As if she can escape from those who have a much higher level, they are already in the same place as the Mc. When the mc chases the enemies he easily caught up with them, he doesn't even use any special techniques when he's in pursuit. Unless he has a teleportation stone there is no way for him to escape. By the way in this situation, he could use the fairy door to hide for a while and even if he can't get out at the moment, he could just cultivate with the women inside him until he's strong enough. The only reason why the author does not use this resource seems to be to force the situation of being in danger and for Donfang Xiu to rescue him, improving the relationship of the two. I'm not saying it's wrong but I don't like that at any time Chu Yuechan suggests to the mc that he use the fairy door to escape. If anyone has ever read the novel Ancient Strengthening Technique or The Black Iron Castle, the mc can use a fairy door-like pocket kingdom to hide from his enemies.

It is more likely that Mengxin will let her loose to find out her plans and counteract them and about the fact that she is capable of knowing the location of the demons, it has already been said that she is an evil woman, it would not be strange if she already had dealings with the demons.

Neena era una cultivadora de qi pero al obtener su qi yang se abrió paso dos reinos menores, a pesar de estar atascada en un nivel inferior debido a su bajo talento en el cultivo.

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