I assumed it was going to be multiversal considering DC goes to other DC universes all the time I didn't think it was going to be just Smallville so I'm glad you changed your mind
I can be petty too and autistic. Since you like cross-universal storytelling and lore this much, I will turn this into a crossover between DC universes. It won't just be unadulterated, pure Smallville anymore. And don't tell me you don't like crossovers. Fuck that, lol. The way you flaunt your multiverse-spanning knowledge, leaving no room for nuances and variations, paves the way for this.
Kryptonite-proof Kryptonian [Smallville Custom CYOA Essence]
TV · daoistgingerale
this whole split personality thing should've been mentioned in the synopsis especially since it can just take control of his body and just be an annoyance this is such a stupid plot and completely unneeded you already made him rely on only blacksmithing fir no reason now he can't even make his own decisions dude what's the point of the mc then? this is a slave with some freedom
- I agree... What, I don't agree with anything. I agree, I agree. Get out, that's my body! Don't threaten me or I'll wipe you out. Look at Najena's breasts. The prosthesis and the eye patch, but I'll fly the owner of such tits. What kind of dog are you? I'm fine, there's something wrong with you if you don't like those tits. I like them, but they belong to the enemy! So work the enemy, how many times do I have to tell you that?
I am reborn in Akame ga KILL
Anime & Comics · FanFictionPremium
is this stupid voice going to be in the entire story?
≪He doesn't like redheads, there's something wrong with you, maybe you don't like busty blondes either ≫
I am reborn in Akame ga KILL
Anime & Comics · FanFictionPremium
why? if you're going to have a summoning system state it in the synopsis
[Host can use system store to summon fighting personnel]
Shinobi Gamer in Marvel
Anime & Comics · Tomas_Vega_2683
why do you keep saying steel?
"My name is Max, a mercenary," Max replied with a smile to Wolverine. "If you ever need my services in the future, whether it's for security, assassination, or rescue, just reach out to me anytime. By the way, it might be a good idea to collect those severed steel claws and... if you happen to run into Magneto or Professor X, tell them you can find me anytime for business."
Marvel: The Dimensional Mercenary
Movies · Galaxy_Wonder
no I never said magic in general just sleep magic is an insane stretch
the story was fine until the asgard arc like you went out of your way to cause problems and it really is ruining this whole story she didn't need to do anything but you decided she should follow thor to asgard and beat up loki for no reason just to make her fall asleep with magic even tho you can't mentally interfere with a symbiote considering it's part of the symbiote God you know one of the most powerful people in marvel but you decided sleep magic should work on it
I feel like him being able to randomly summon people should've been mentioned in the synopsis
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did you skip the part that said it was inert so him telling people does absolutely nothing
He had learned how big the world truly was and how small he was in comparison. What was a man supposed to do with the information that there was a portal on Skagos that allowed one to travel to other worlds, if you survived it?
Harry's Multiversal Journey
Book&Literature · SenseiCaffeine
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original Knowledge is Power
4.6
Futanari with a system watch as she becomes more and more powerful as the story goes on and watch as she gets more and more knowledge64 Chs 1.1k Collections
nah I call bs I think you're making a random excuse because you don't want to write it anymore and think quoting religious belief is more tolerable than just saying you don't want to write it anymore
Guys, I've been learning about stuff over the past few weeks, and they aint good, at all, well it is, but not for you guys... I believe in God/Jesus, and because of that I've learned things that might imply I'm blaspheming, and not just that, I've been potentially blaspheming the Holy Ghost, albeit unknowingly; DC supports characters that marry each other of the same sex, and by extention, by endorsing their fiction, I am automatically endorsing their foolishness, so this fic might get a permanent drop... For now, I just can't continue with the foolishness.
Nano-Machine (DC X INVINCIBLE)
Anime & Comics · PettiaMius_6689