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a really good start and unique story line am looking forward to see what you'd do moving forward. also what would you do with the parents. Will you go revenge route or something else.

I always enjoy a good revenge fanfic especially since this revenge fiction is unique in its own way instead of the typical training in using the verse's magic and then stomping on everyone. This fiction actually develops the character properly so that he has his own unique skills

Amazing read with a different take compared to others. Looking forward to read more of this.

Honestly, this is a very good fanfic and hopefully more chapters will be posted soon

honestly, it's one of the best I've read on webnovel hopefully a new chapter will be posted soon

so far not a bad story and a valid plot progression there isn't any rush to the plot and it's well balanced except for the fact this story is about the ML being overpowered other than that it's an amazing read for one piece fans

Love your story and how it's progressing and bot rushed in anyway like some other stories. I'm looking forward to reading more but be careful to not burn yourself out from trying to post chapters quickly.