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PullUp: No ! It’ll ruin the story

In twilight with superman powers ! · C0
3 days ago

Prakhartheturtle: The art of being first is to lurk in webnovel app and refreash it every second

Grandpa Universe In Multiverse · C108
1 week ago

mugen95: Sorry! Missed that, its ear...I will include it later

Max: Fate Breaker · C22
4 weeks ago
And the tree continued to grow and grow, until reaching outer space. When the satellites finally saw it and the information gained by the government, they decided to name it the percy jackson popsicle tree. View More

noctus: And Percy was never let down the tree they say you can hear him ask for help

Max: Fate Breaker · C23
4 weeks ago
Good chapter!

There was an error when he first started fighting the manticore, when he threw his first tomahawk, it just says chopping off of... but doesn't say what was chopped off. View More
Max: Fate Breaker · C22
4 weeks ago
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Jetos: Thanks for the chapter!

Max: Fate Breaker · C15
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapter! View More
Max: Fate Breaker · C15
1 month ago
The prophecy was wicked! And zeus claiming thalia right after was the icing on the cake haha. Thanks for the chapter! View More
Max: Fate Breaker · C14
1 month ago
Spoiler!? Noooooooo! Though if you go that route, it would be hilarious! xD View More

mugen95: Nooooo!!! Stop guessing my story!!!😭😭

Max: Fate Breaker · C13
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapter!

(Im)patiently aaiting for more 😂

Keep up the good work! View More
Max: Fate Breaker · C13
1 month ago
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mugen95: Dude atleast read the chapter before commenting😂

Max: Fate Breaker · C11
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapter! View More
Max: Fate Breaker · C11
1 month ago
Thanks for the chapter!

In the original books the satyrs are all searching for the god pan, so I'm curious on how your twist in your story will affect how the satyrs treat the mc. If we assume they are still searching for the god pan, wouldn't they be ecstatic when they find out that the mc is his son? Also, are they aware that pan was trapped by Zeus, etc.

Looking forward to seeing more from your story. View More
Max: Fate Breaker · C10
1 month ago
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Immortal Travelling Through Worlds · C11
1 month ago
just checked it on the website and was able to read the new chappie. the app is still showing the wrong chapter.

thanks for the chapter! View More
Immortal Travelling Through Worlds · C10
1 month ago
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Ghostflow: Found the new one

Marvel: Just a Kryptonian Goddess · C6
1 month ago
I am here. Bwahahaha... ahem, sorry, got carried away. View More
Marvel: Just a Kryptonian Goddess · C6
1 month ago
Oopsie... View More
Immortal Travelling Through Worlds · C10
1 month ago
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Jetos: I'm interested. The Greek god pan has some amazingly useful powers that could make this MC great if he inherits any or all of them.

For now I'll hold off on making any direct opinions on your story since their isnt much to go by at the moment. However I can say that your grammar was fairly good. I could actually read this chapter without having to pause to try and decipher what you were trying to say.

For the above statement on fairly good grammar, I am referring to the one mistake that made me question if I read the sentence wrong. "By the time I got my Visa 'was'..." I dont think you need to add the was, unless you missed a word after was?

Anyway thanks for the chapter!

Max: Fate Breaker · C1
1 month ago
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Max: Fate Breaker · C1
1 month ago
I'm interested. The Greek god pan has some amazingly useful powers that could make this MC great if he inherits any or all of them.

For now I'll hold off on making any direct opinions on your story since their isnt much to go by at the moment. However I can say that your grammar was fairly good. I could actually read this chapter without having to pause to try and decipher what you were trying to say.

For the above statement on fairly good grammar, I am referring to the one mistake that made me question if I read the sentence wrong. "By the time I got my Visa 'was'..." I dont think you need to add the was, unless you missed a word after was?

Anyway thanks for the chapter! View More
Max: Fate Breaker · C1
1 month ago
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Arch_Bishop: Wooh, finally, final realm for a dao of soul

Lord Xue Ying · C1380
2 months ago
Thanks for the chapter! View More
Lord Xue Ying · C1380
2 months ago

WhiteGhost: I’m lovin' it!

Add A Little Lightning · C11
2 months ago
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WhiteGhost: I’m lovin' it!

Add A Little Lightning · C11
2 months ago
Thanks for the chapters! View More
Add A Little Lightning · C11
2 months ago
And then... sea of abyss master presses the scarlet cloud city self destruct button! View More
Lord Xue Ying · C1376
2 months ago
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animangaex: First.

Lord Xue Ying · C1376
2 months ago
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MarMarc: I will steal your bones.

Reborn as a GOD · C63
2 months ago
I say you keep going and let the people who enjoy your story to continue being able to read it. Yes there are people who are gonna hate it. But you also need to remember, even professional authors who have millions reading their books, have millions more who dont read or hate their books.

As an example, I keep hearing about how good lord of the rings and game of thrones books are all so good. I absolutely despise those books.... only way you could get me to read them is if you paid me to read them. And let's face it... noone is going to pay me to read them.

I think your story is good. I dont think it's the best I've ever read, but I do enjoy it. I have read books far worse than this as well.

Also another thing to keep in mind. If your getting negative comments in your latest chapters you have to stop and think about that. 1. They have read all the previous chapters and are stating their personal opinion on how they wished it went. (Its not their story however, so do whatever the f*** you want in it.) 2. They may just be **** starters and aren't reading the chapters at all. Also meaning, they are bored and have nothing better to do. And last but not least 3. They are just as capable as you to start their own story with their own ideas. The fact that they dont means 2 things, either they have no creative talent in the first place or they dont know how to get their point across in their writing.

All this means that you are already ahead of them, simply by trying. From what I've personally read and what others are commenting, you have a good story that people are willing to take time out of their days to read. So dont let some people who don't give or don't know how to give constructive criticism ruin it for the readers who enjoy your story(s).

I will keep this in my library for a little while in hope that you will continue it. View More
Something About You (Twilight) · C0
2 months ago
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