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because if they did none of this would of happened because they would of already known
Liam also did not put any effort into hiding his face. Today was their last day. What was even the point of hiding anything?
Re: Evolution Online
Fantasy · Yolohy
he has to make a city and let it run as a normal one would he doesn't get a choice about sending a police officer out if that's what one would do
ch 1337 A Chain Reaction
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
doesn't this guy showing up all the time basicly leave a trail back to klein
Admiral of Blood Senor!
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
they don't have day or night cycle but have a town called afternoon
Demon Hunter Colin Iliad, with two swords on his back, pointed ahead and said, "That's Afternoon Town."
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
translation: I need to force the main character into a fight to show off how strong he is now so I'm going to remove any intelligence he has
Acht didn't have the time to deal with these maggots so he ignored them and walked away. 'They will leave when no one opens the door.' He thought.
Leave Me Alone, Heroines!
Fantasy · ClashingBlades98
or its just a old gun and a blood moon
The revolver in ancient European style and the crimson moon that looked different from Earth's moon could only mean one thing!
Lord of Mysteries
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
this is written like we are mean to recognise the name or country we don't
He was Blue Cloud Nation's Lin Xuan!
New Father: Empress Appearing On My Doorstep With Our Daughters
Eastern · Cloud Fire Pheonix
its more like she realised that he's strong and that's changed her mind because now he has value to her if he was weak she would still be treating him like trash
Though she hasn't been a good mother to him Sonia hopes he doesn't take too many risks. She knows she doesn't have that right, but she still cares about him. Besides her initial fear of him is almost gone, although he seems cold she was quite surprised at him helping Julia. Even an idiot would realize that he took it easy on Elijah even though Elijah wasn't thinking about the well-being of Amon. Although she didn't want to believe it, she realized that Elijah had a grudge against Amon.
Amon, The Legendary Overlord
Fantasy · Lruska
OK so I guess the meat has levels too and that does something I mean genes but what does that actually mean what's the difference between opened and filled why is there such a huge difference between amon and anyone else even if they are nearly the same level like I know he's different but I have no frame of reference of what is a normal power level eveyone in that tournament either gave up or got 1 shot
The tournament continues, Amon was already the champion and he won 10 kg of level 20 animal meat along with a trophy and a gold medal.
Amon, The Legendary Overlord
Fantasy · Lruska
still haven't been told who this guy is author I mean we can work out its his brother but your initial world building is awful not trying to sound like a duck when I say this but it comes across like you wrote down everyone's relationships on a bit of paper before you started and are assuming we have all that information too
"Tsk, Elijah pretends to be indifferent, but he doesn't seem to be pretending."
Amon, The Legendary Overlord
Fantasy · Lruska
the daughters were never told im honestly surprised the dad didn't tell them because he seems like a genuinely nice guy who understands that amon might be grieving but he slipped up by not telling his kids
"This boy…" Julia didn't like it one bit to see how Amon acted, but she didn't want to stress about it in the morning.
Amon, The Legendary Overlord
Fantasy · Lruska
put this at the top please so I don't feel like ives missed 5 chapters I had a legit headache trying to understand why he was abandoned until now
At age 5, Amon had unlocked the fury gene. Since then, he had extremely violent behavior and could hardly control himself. This was also the main reason his parents didn't want to take custody of him and why he was pushed to his grandparents.
Amon, The Legendary Overlord
Fantasy · Lruska
julius your great but mabey tell your daughters that the people he was living with just died so he's still grieving or something you know so they don't think he's just being moody or something
Julius thought he was only being like this because he was defensive about losing his grandparents and smiled: "These two are my daughters, Maísa and Julia. I hope you all get along well. They are the same age as you."
Amon, The Legendary Overlord
Fantasy · Lruska
and I know it says she's actually 26 but that is literally the opposite of how the last chapter explained everything
Mimi flies in front of Vincent's eyes and says [Master, remember that you are no longer in your former world. This is a different world, and here, as long as a female is above 13, she has become a woman. Because this world has a longer time interval per day, compared to your former world. So, if I'm to estimate Hilda's age in your former world, she should be 26 years old. However, in this world, the human body doesn't age like it does in your former world. That's why she looks like a thirteen-year-old girl from your previous world. Humans can live for thousands of years in this world with the help of rejuvenation and the use of elixirs made by a dark mage.] Mimi replies, nonchalantly.
Reincarnated With A Badluck System
Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
I'm still confused from the whole time thing does that means she's actually 7 and a half if her body looks 13 because he's 6 months old and looks 1
Mimi flies in front of Vincent's eyes and says [Master, remember that you are no longer in your former world. This is a different world, and here, as long as a female is above 13, she has become a woman. Because this world has a longer time interval per day, compared to your former world. So, if I'm to estimate Hilda's age in your former world, she should be 26 years old. However, in this world, the human body doesn't age like it does in your former world. That's why she looks like a thirteen-year-old girl from your previous world. Humans can live for thousands of years in this world with the help of rejuvenation and the use of elixirs made by a dark mage.] Mimi replies, nonchalantly.
Reincarnated With A Badluck System
Fantasy · Perverted_Fella
hes not suffering that's the whole point of the skill it prevents him from feeling bad about the fact he can't get close to anyone easily
She was not sad because she had just learned that her beloved had a skill that basically made it impossible for any woman to ever win a place in his heart no matter how small, the reason behind her sadness was that the man she loved so much was suffering.
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
or and this is just a thought make the people fight without guns seeing as the long you wait the harder it will be you can't just keep throwing guns at them even if they are system guns unless the author decides to retcon the whole only get energy if you kill them on your own thing
This Rank 3 Goblin Magic Cannon could potentially be the weapon that mankind would have to rely on in the future. Although it was still impossible to build it, possessing the construction blueprint and knowing the limits of the weapon as well as its operation was of great help in preparing the necessary things for the assembly of the weapon.
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
I like how these random goblins that are going to die soon get names but his maids are referred to as stuff like middle aged maid and younger maid
"Hey, Geminder. Can I have this human all to myself?" A female goblin looked at Bai Zemin from head to toe and licked her purple lips with her long tongue, "I like this human male. He looks strong and powerful. He will definitely be able to take it for a while before he dies, unlike those human males from before."
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
dude they literaly told you the person measuring you was a guy pay attention
"So, wait. Maiya is a fitting attendant, but she's a woman. Women don't tend to fit teenage boys for their uniforms, that just doesn't happen. It would make sense that I'm in the wrong school, right? But, no. Why would both she and the principal be so okay with fitting me if this wasn't the right school? When she was picking what uniform she wanted to make, there was both a male and female one. Does that mean this school is gender-neutral? No, it's called an all-boys academy. But, I don't see any boys around other than me! Hell, not even the teachers are men! What the fuck is going on!?"
Trap Academy: Starting at Level 1 (DISCONTINUED)
Fantasy · TrapConquistador
but its also her fault that they were even in that situation
She didn't betray his sister when she needed her the most so he did something in return for her. He gave her his trust.
Re: Evolution Online
Fantasy · Yolohy