Why does reading chapters make my eyes bleed? Does the brain flow out of the ears?
ch 0 5 Chapter 5-Green Magic Hoverboard
Movies · Muiyuki_Snowfall
I initially did not like the Gin character, just some random old man, on a random island conveniently having everything that an MC needs, after you see such characters you say: Oh, how convenient... And now it causes only laughter, especially these ridiculous plans in the background, which if removed at all will not change anything, in my opinion, this only spoils the story.
ch 14 13. The Grand Plan
Anime & Comics · Zeckyll11
In general, the genetics of the MHA world itself does not allow you to stay in the body for more than 1 quirk, this can be seen on failed nomus, people who are forcibly given new quirks and they either die, or their quirks evolve and change(or they physically change). Why was it necessary to play the card of three forces, it would be more interesting to see how his choice of three led to the merger and creation of one, full-fledged force, then the author would not have to write every time that they are three, but different and weak, and not at all quirks, but super soldiers.
ch 0 7 Getting to know more and the battle for the TITLE.
Anime & Comics · X_x_INFINITY_x_X
That is, all readers know that he has quirks given to him by the system, but the rest of the world(fan fiction) will assume that he does not have quirks? And most likely it will be served as a gratuitous kid becomes a hero, watch for free without registration and SMS.
(A/N)- How is the chapter development? Any advice and suggestion, please mention them in the comments. So I want to focus a bit more on MC. As the systems said at first, all quirks are low potential quirks. They are tough to develop and upgrade like general quirks, which are like a part of your body which Aizawa says as. MC has two legendary skills, they are high potential skills, but their advancement is the toughest. Learning them and making them a part of you is different, remember. MC won't try to get OneForAll or any other quirks and his system gives him the quirks which make him super-soldier or similar but his quirk in the school administration forum and hero license will be nill/none/(empty).
Anime & Comics · X_x_INFINITY_x_X
They are really similar, both morons, one who wanted to become a hero and did nothing for it, the other lost in a mental struggle with a 5-year-old child, and became a hero because this is the last wish.
And for those who think MC is like- Izuku Midoriya/Deku, read the tags. There is a reason they exist.
Anime & Comics · X_x_INFINITY_x_X
Then it would not have been possible to play the card, the last wish of the Ex-Oki. After all, the MC is only 22, apparently at his age it is not yet supposed to have clear goals, and understanding why he needs it, in the mental struggle of memories, he was defeated by a 5-year-old boy.
ch 0 5 Break down. Last wish. Training(?).
Anime & Comics · X_x_INFINITY_x_X
Apparently the author likes this word, that's why he uses it. It's logical after all.
ch 15 Ripples
Anime & Comics · TheHiddenSword
No way, put up with it.
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Anime & Comics · Dotencsure
The classic Chinese emigrant. Chinese restaurant, Chinatown, will try to drive to Colleen Wing
This was New York, USA, and he is the owner of a Chinese restaurant in Manhattan.
Anime & Comics · YFT
The dialogues are so strained that I read them with my hand to my face. Zoro generally feels like a stupid dummy, or a mob. Dude, they recently fought against people who use the mantra, the first thing Zoro had to think about was that there was another mantra user in front of him. The chapter is about what the main character is pretentious, and all the others in front of him are not. I like your story, please pay more attention to the other characters, so that they do not look like a simple background for the MC.
ch 19 Strawhat Pirates
Anime & Comics · Vencha
The classics, in every variation of Naruto, are sitting somewhere in a dark corner, Danzo curses the Hokage, saying I need an MC for the root
The ninja was dismissed and disappeared instantly as soon as he received the order. Danzo, in his frustration, muttered to himself, "Damn Hiruzen, you may protect the boy from me, but he is destined to serve Konoha in the shadows as a member of Root." With these words, Danzo closed his eyes and concealed himself in the shadows of the dark environment.
Naruto: Self-Evolution
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba