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Im not sure if we read the same novel lol. Sunny is way stronger then anyone else his rank with arguably one exception. I honestly had to double check to make sure im in the right review section cuz your comment makes no sense at all.

Yes and no. Read it. If the slave thing bothers you then be at ease as it doesnt play a huge role in the story yet. He always acts of his own accord.

the only thing that bothers me is the scale of the military and the human race in general. what i mean by that is that the humans are an interplanetray species and the military should be gigantic. But it never feels that way. The military trainging camps are half empty, he always runs into the same people and the Mission after his first Semester in the academy feels like it involves a hundred students or sth even tho it is treated like a major event for the military. BUT, in the most rescent arc that changes. The scale starts to feel much more believable and if the author keeps that up then i have nothing to complain about anymore :D

if you Stick with it you will notice it returning to a more Military focused Story quite quickly.

My favourite novel on this site. The authors writing skills are top notch and the story developement is amazing. One of the strongest points about this book might actually be the interactions between characters. There has never been a Story where i cared about the characters on such a deep level.

This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.