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A lot of people already said this but I want to write my review. I drop this fic at chapter 70, witch I think is enough to judge. The fic is very well written and the concept is great, I really like this system, nothing grand and simple to understand, no quest, no personality, just stats and levels with the ability to redistribute the stats one time per month, flexible and not op by nature, but very op if use right, I like it. The problem is that this isn't the focus of the story, this fic is, above all, a harem/smut fic, and the type of harem fic that if you are a female and speak more then 2 lines with the mc is to late, you fall in love and want to share him with everyone. From the moment the mc get OFA his development stop and all the focus is in the smut/harem, maybe this is for you, but I don't care for harem (and this type of harem where everyone fall for the mc because he is the mc is particularly bad for me) and I don't like smut. The mc get OFA more or less chapter 20, at chapter 70 no significant progress has been made, just him fucking people. This fic isn't bad, if you like smut this might be for you, is just not for me. P.S. WebNovel has this annoying habit of round down the number of star in the review, so to be clear, my score is 2.8

I just notice that in the review I assumed that Chibi_mon_mon was a guy, sorry if its wrong.

Oooohhhh boy, brace yourselfs, this will be a loooong ass review. First, none of my problems with this fic come from the translation, the opposite actually, Chibi_mon_mon do a great job translating (and adapting), I would have dropped if was not for it. But still is one of those chinese fic with all the cliches. Now, my problem with this fic is the MC, he is just not likable, a MC can be good, bad, grey or whatever, but he must be likable! For me the worst part is that Ron (the MC) is a jerk but the author (not Chibi_mon_mon, there is a limit to what he can do for the story as a translator) keep try to paint him in a good light, example, "Hey, I kidnap you because you are hot and will make you stay in my ship against your will but I not going to rape you, I'm such a nice guy." and immediately after he kills a bunch of innocent merchants "but he is a pirate, so it's ok because pirates do that". Is hard to me explain here without the context, the problem is not that he is evil, he is not, is that the author want the MC to do whatever but still make you think he is good. Would be so easy make him more likable, kidnap the person but say she will be free after he show the corruption of the marines by that point she will want be in the crew, kill the merchants then review they were slave traders, etc. etc. Or just go full dark side and stop try making him look good. Ok, I rant a lot about this, final points, it's a typical power fantasy, every hot woman will love the MC, he is immediately overpower and whole bunch of face slapping. Overhaul is not the worst thing you would read, for me is the type of fic I probably will never finish, is kinda fun until I get bored. If you like this kind of power fantasy you might like it.

Just to know, whats up with the fate and got tags? I never saw fate, would I lose a lot because of that?