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97Alex

97Alex

male LV 5

Yeah, I'm not that great at this ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

2018-10-21 Joined Romania

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I will only remind you to be careful with how many you add, I already think you're adding too many and judging by how you phrased it, you won't stop but remember that it will get increasingly harder to add "screen time" to everyone and most will be relegated to background non-existent characters if you keep adding more
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I don't get it, why does he Have to help them? Waste of time, potential danger to himself, exertion by pushing the byke instead of using it and getting away, overall a stupid decision

It would be a massive pain in the ass not to use the motorcycle after all that trouble of reaching Cole���s house, but it couldn't be helped. Ryan would have to protect those two, and he couldn't make much noise, so he would have to push the vehicle.

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99

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I am honestly baffled by the constant attempt at caring about others. I really find it impossible to understand, how can someone care for people they don't even know? It's getting annoying tbh to see him constantly thinking about that.

"… Hundreds of people died in a possible plane crash, and here I'm thinking about looting the plane," Ryan said after a long sigh. "I changed for the worse in just a few days… not even the apocalypse changed me so much."

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain

Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99

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Personally she is my favorite, but she's very hard to write right. There is a fanfic, For love of Magic by noodlehammer that in my opinion has her written the best, even more in the other two sequels. Do give that a try and skim through it if you need inspiration on how to write her though.
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