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Full mark 5 star just to counter the 1 star usuall people from webnovel that expect mediocracy and not a story with a REAL development. I expect most of the 1 star gave it that because he isn't from chapter 2 one shotting galactus or having a 15+ harem from marvel. This story is a guy that get a "system" with the concept do once in a while and i mean once in while "missions" and you unlock an aspect of SHAZAM.The trick here and the best part of the story is that the MC can develop his powers instead of waiting like usual system fics to get better or stronger powers. Mc is almost like a real person with development get ting sweapt by getting evil powers and almost losing himself to him like a regular joe whould have. His power development is fast not super fast but been able kill mephisto with tricks and help makes him semi "overpowered" in the marvel universe. Most characters i have seen so far from marvel have their personaly from the comic and depending on a situation will react realisticaly to it. Mc isnt lustfull or idiotic so far in the story, read up to chapter 80+. Author keep up the good work use more other peoples perspective to descripe the situation like you started on the latest chapters and keep it a little more than 3 paragraphs to give real weight to how people see the MC would develop your story better i believe. Now i hope we dont lose the story after the confortation with galactus or a suden nerf for the MC after that. One of the best stories to read in webnovel, especially lately with such usuall consept of low quality stories with harem harem harem overpower MC with 20 chapters and been with 1k word a chapter.

Honestly good story so far and i like how he is portraying the Marvel characters in character and his MC is just a logical human that's developing.But man his chapters are so so so short for the kind of story he is trying to build, with it being slow and showing character progression or even their interactions. I would recommend people to wait then read his chapters in mass not 1 at the time as he updates they lose way too fast their laster of the brand-new cool thought out and good story that it is.

Honestly if its anything like your Marvel fic i cant wait to see how big the scope of this story is going to be.I love how the characters are potraited how you write their feelings so well and even their reasoning witch gives them a sense of character i love that.I also like how you started teen wolf with malia* favorite * char by the way and i would be so in to her beeing the main love intersest i know i know its to soon to make anything hapen if the ororo development was anything go by.So far the fic is one of the most well developed on this site cant wait to read more please mr author keep the updates coming.

Honestly not bad at all at first i was skeptical for a story without any score but man i am glad i read it.Its a refresing take on a bleach story i cant wait to read more of it.The characters stay true to how they where from the anime and the MC is intresting only thing thats hard and you need to get used to is the old english because of the time period,witch i like and makes it "feel" like its the time period.Author-san please keep up the good work.

FINALLY something different in this stale website, I can't wait to read more of this epic story. Character development for the MC is splendid no op from the start but gradual lvl up and man oh man how he gets stronger is interesting. Author, please keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming, you got my stones. :D

good back ground good flow of the story but man 59 women in his harem is a bit to much I mean srl who takes this story srl or finds it enjoyable at least I don't next time Mr. author please try to get the maximum only be 6 or 8 girls thats the only issue i found with this story it got the feeling of got to catch them all vibe from what i read until chapter 20+

Loved it I like how you slowly show us the mc's character through the story and no bs in the first chapter explaining his background. I love how you stick the original characters with their original personality. The story progressed so far is phenomenal I can't wait to read more keep up the good work author-san this site needs more writers like you in it :D

Paywall fanfic dont waste your time on this type of fanfic guys there are way better fics out there either way for you to f&p to!Geezzzzzzzzz

Paywall fanfics shouldnt exist its such a waste of talent people keep doing that not worth your time or your dollars!Author stop doing that you got got bad reputation already with your other fics if only you posted advanced chapters and instead of posting only advertisements you would get money now you get nothing geezz

This fic is the quality I expect from fanfic.net, not this site its a nice change of pace I loved its awesome character development and especially how the author made us learn about the oc/mc and showed us his feelings by his actions and his character development so far instead of just force-feeding bs like other do on this site. The character's interaction between them is awesome and organic I can't stress this enough it's natural finally someone gets how people talk and behave with others it was beautiful.!Please author keep up the good work and don't leave us with the other subpar fics on this site we need your gem to keep the chapters coming!

The reason I think he didn't answer is that he already said he doesn't have experience with romance so I just see it as a shortcut for that to make the story progress.

No problem I have got worse responses from other authors yours was way nicer [img=recommend]

Your story especially the flow of it now is awesome. I am not going to start reading your stories until you rewrite the older chapters and the few that you changed makes me want to read them but I am going to wait for you to rewrite the dialogues or just start a new fic with this kind of o dialogue. I can't wait, man, keep up the good work and keep your ideas making this shitfest of the site with harems and all wish-fulfillment fics a better place to enjoy quality fics.

My problem isn't the parentheses it's that when someone speaks I want to imagine the scene not read it like a script from a movie. For example "I really like your dress, it brings out y...."(character speaking here) he stopped midsentence after feeling a cold piercing gaze on his back. Describe the setting man the little ticks of the characters when they speak when you describe them makes them feel more real not just a bunch of dialogue.