I think story is good but it need to slow down or give plot some time and i really like the idea of this story but in the end its your story your choice
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Anime & Comics · Naruto_FanFic
No esdeath must live plz
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Anime & Comics · Charlottes
Man i liked it the way it was But its your story you can change it as you like
ch 45 Notice (Not a Chapter)
Ace Of Diamond: Baseball System
Anime & Comics · Hoku_1