Webnovel Author: SteveOl - Fanfic Collection

SteveOl

1mth

Replied to Hemanth_Chandra

You have commented a lot, thank you :D

It was just the usual conversation between two senile friends.

Naruto: Secret organization

Anime & Comics · SteveOl

SteveOl

1mth

Replied to Hemanth_Chandra

Jejeje Just wait.

Unfortunately, real life is not like the fanfic you read, where the reincarnated person, just because they exist, becomes special and their fate cannot be predicted. From the moment you enter this world you become part of it. You cannot simply fight what can be considered the will of the whole world.

Naruto: Secret organization

Anime & Comics · SteveOl

SteveOl

1mth

Replied to GoldZero

Yeah, I didn't know how to balance at that time.

The book was quite old, from more than 300 years ago, which is not surprising, even in this day and age you still read things like "the art of war", which is already thousands of years old. What is surprising is that a comic, or manga, is read even in these times, even if only for a niche, which speaks volumes about how famous it was.

Naruto: Secret organization

Anime & Comics · SteveOl

SteveOl

2mth

Commented

Too mediocre

ch 80 Chapter 80 I'm back

DxD: I got Isekai’d In Ecchi girls World

Anime & Comics · Vengeance9578

SteveOl

2mth

Commented

I think it's best to concentrate on the current one. Otherwise, with the little time you have to write, you may leave everyone dissatisfied.

This book has been deleted.

SteveOl

3mth

Posted

Too many falshbacks, It breaks the pace of the story. It's better to advance the story and create a special arc to tell the past of the prota.

Naruto: My Harem Academia

Anime & Comics · Skythe

SteveOl

3mth

Commented

Please new chapter!

ch 18 Chapter 18 Gift to Xiao Xun'er

Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di

Anime & Comics · Trinity369

SteveOl

3mth

Commented

Thanks! I'm waiting for today's chapter! :D

ch 18 Chapter 18 Gift to Xiao Xun'er

Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di

Anime & Comics · Trinity369

SteveOl

3mth

Commented

Thanks and pls update, I like this a lot!

ch 14 Chapter 14 Xiao Yan getting Beaten

Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di

Anime & Comics · Trinity369

SteveOl

3mth

Commented

Thanks!

ch 12 Chapter 12 Dig Out Your Old Man!!

Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di

Anime & Comics · Trinity369

SteveOl

3mth

Commented

Why is there no chapter today?

ch 11 Chapter 11 Is Alchemy King Powerfull?

Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di

Anime & Comics · Trinity369

SteveOl

3mth

Commented

It was interesting...WAS

ch 71 Chapter 70 : Second Place

Ninja World Gold List: Uchiha Was Exposed At The Start

Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody

SteveOl

3mth

Posted

First, the story follows the canon, but nothing new exists. But the most important thing is that he is just too stupid, at the start he said he had no money, but then he can make gunpowder, so just selling that formula to anyone could have earned him a fortune. Also, he fights with the little fairy doctor, but just by having a good relationship with her he could have earned much more, after all, she is not an alchemist. So I don't recommend this.

BTTH: from Dou Disciple to Dou God

Anime & Comics · 8Mysterious8

SteveOl

3mth

Commented

I don't know what to think about the protagonist. Why did he suddenly went retard? There's nothing in that cave that is absolutely necessary for his strength, even the flying technique can not be said to be indispensable. As for the map, if he forms a good relationship with her, she's going to give it to him, after all, she's not an alquemist. Finally, did he become so stupid to forget that she's the only one who can take him to the hidden forest?

ch 0 8 Finding the Cave

BTTH: from Dou Disciple to Dou God

Anime & Comics · 8Mysterious8

SteveOl

3mth

Commented

Thanks, it was good.

ch 191 Another story

In MHA with Star Platinum

Anime & Comics · blazuki

SteveOl

3mth

Posted

Too rushed, I can't enjoy anything. Also, it's too centered around the protagonist and too many details are left out. On the other hand, the relationship with the girl is too superficial.