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Don’t want to spoil it much. Been reading this one on patreon before realizing he was posting it here as well. This might be his best work. At the very least the incoming chapters are all great.

Although I am still reading this fanfiction, I do believe that some parts of the chapter are extended without giving much in return. A lot of ideas are constantly repeated which make some parts really boring to read. I barely managed to keep reading after the first 5 chapters due to it. That repetition part does get a bit better in later chapters but it is still present somewhat. The author seems to have extra chapters in his patreon, so I believe this will be updated stably. The character of the mc feels like it is not defined as clearly in between chapters as his decisions and way of think show some changes but it is not too big of a turn off. If anything, the only big issue I see with the mc is that due to his cheat, he is too op. Feels like unless opponents from outside the verse or literal divine opponents are introduced, he won't ever struggle really so there is barely any tension in the story. I am mostly reading it due to the dragon wife. Did really like the choice of which dragon he chose. Still, the story feels a bit stale for most of the chapters and it is just the mc being op and being better than everyone by "working hard" and having better resources than everyone else. However, the story did become a bit better in the later chapters so I will still be reading this out of curiosity to see if anything truly interesting happens. I somehow feel like the story would be much more interesting if the narrative is followed from the point of view of other characters instead of our current mc. I would normally give a lower rating due to what I talked about but I still think the story could improve so I am trying not to be too harsh despite the boredom that the first five chapters were lol.