I love the description 馃挏
Blaze wanted to throw up upon seeing the lifeless bodies of dragon-slayers littering the paths she took as she ran with Kingsley on her back. No matter how hard she tried, she couldn't get rid of the gruesome sight of her dead allies out of her head. The dizziness caused by the sickening scent of blood all around her was only made worse due to her enhanced sense of smell compared to others.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
It's getting more interesting.
ch 0 7 Earth Wyrm
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
clean and concise
She took a glance at the others beside her as they began lighting up torches to illuminate the paths before them. The groups split up and wasted no time to locate the Dragon in its supposed nest, scouring in a different direction.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
simple yet better to understand
The pressure in the atmosphere surrounding the four Dragon-slayers was real as the crowd was left unnerved.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
I love the description.
Winter was currently dressed in a fresh set of the Death Reaper uniform, white gloves on his hands. Gold buttons lined the black, double-breasted military coat, matching the color of the novelty epaulets on each shoulder, a gold aiguillette hanging on the right.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
Okay, so this part is surprising impressive.
Colleen's shoulders stooped helplessly, trembling ever-so-slightly.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
ok nice word choice
"Wha... ish... it?" Blazed slurred. With her cheeks painted a bright shade of pink from excessive alcohol, she hiccupped as she ogled at her best friend.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
How to pronounce Jarak's name? Harak? Charak? Jaerak?
"So you're here," Jarak Lockster greeted Winter with his languorous uncanny voice. Jarak Lockster was one of the top mercenaries in the Death Reaper Organization, having been a dragon-slayer who had abandoned his faction to join the secretive syndicate. With the former's usual frosty demeanor, it seemed he wasn't at all pleased to see Winter.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
Nice
The guy swallowed a plentiful of dry saliva as Blaze's raging eyes landed on him. The former attempted to move his stiffened body, pointing at a lifeless body not far away from where they were standing.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
Impressive
A sudden burst of fury led Blaze to impulsively leap over the edge of the cliff and fall from a monstrous height. It hurt all over, but the burning rage that enveloped her whole entity allowed her to pay no heed to pain, focusing only to take the fastest possible way home.
Fantasy 路 QueenDragoness
The author knows how to use "show not tell" technique and writing, especially in narrating the characters emotion. Not just simply telling the readers that she/he fid and that. The prologue part is well-written, from there, we could really say that the remaining parts of the story would also reflect to it. It is clear and precise. Also, the synopsis is catchy. And I am wondering what 'gift' the protagonist has.
Behind the Veil : Vengeful Spirit
Horror 路 nia94