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Feel like he should have gave everyone that participated something, even if it was just 1000 or 500 contribution points just to show the four who abstained that it's an important exercise to participate in that helps with teamwork, agility awareness etc. Other than that enjoyed it. Thanks for the chapter

When he does finally find out she's his daughter he better be angry at the Ouroboros obviously I don't want him direct any of that at Shinta and I don't think he will cos it's not her fault. Also I get they probably had their reasons but they know how capable Emery is and how often he defied expectations, which is exactly why they tried to trap him at their faction in the first place. They also know how real the love between him and Silva was so they know how messed up it is to deprive him of his last living connection to her. It's something I'd expect from the Queen and Visla but I am kinda disappointed in Annara and Bob tbh. But yeah overall I just want a bit of righteous fury from Emery when the truth comes to light.

This reveal is good and done in a perfect spiderman comical way but people just love to be mad bro I swear

I loved the original with naruto as the mc but I am excited to see what you do/have done with this re-write. Wish I found it sooner but at the same time I don ’t because now I have 100 chapters to binge