minute ago(no period) with her, (use a comma) Mark, (use comma) Rita (no period) and Jenny. or you can say minutes ago with Mark, Rita, Jenny and I.
Lily and Jenny had also logged-in back just a few minutes ago, with her, Mark, Rita, and Jenny, we set off into the skies. We've been meeting Jenny the last three days, mostly helping her out level up a bit more within my own forest, which was populated with monsters too.
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
The only issue i have with this novel is that both mother and daughters names are practically the same name! even if you just change the way you spell the names, it is still the same name! can you please change one of their names, im getting very confused who is talking when they are all together.
ch 408 Elena's Horse
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
im sorry but i was getting mad that i would be force to read your novel and only way to do that 3was download!!! im already paying to read and i dont want to download just to read. Plus i dont want to read on my phone. i perfer larger letters for my eyes
ch 36 [Bonus chapter]Setting Up Base (1)
Fantasy · Kurai_Takahashi
No thank you! i will not download anything unknown apps to my computer!!! your novel was getting boring anyways
ch 36 [Bonus chapter]Setting Up Base (1)
Fantasy · Kurai_Takahashi
sorry i cant read this anymore! could you in the future warn people if your going lesby...
ch 121 This Is Not The Tension I Wanted...!
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
partner is assaulting her.......shes doing the same thing to mary as lucifer did! this going to turn lesb?
ch 119 Partner Is A Bit Jealous
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Can you please have Adel hold back a little! She is getting way to clingy and its getting annoying that she gets way to jealous of every little thing! Let Faith decide who she wants to be with on her own
ch 256 The Great Change
Fantasy · invayne
its I didn't have a choice
"I didn't… had a choice…"
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
I was kinda hoping he would be more solo player! he is just letting everyone take the good stuff that drops. He is to much of a pushover. It feels like its becoming a harem novel as well, one guy and bunch of women, then they all fight for him. He should be getting lots of those drops for his self which could be useful for himself, but lets the women take it (not the clothes) the items
ch 20 Chapter 20
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
where did you hear that! not where did you head that!
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Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
who the heck is ning???
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Games · Snoring_Panda
who is Ning? you meant Alex?
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Games · Snoring_Panda
im starting to hate the sister! she is too pushy
ch 316 Proposition
Games · Snoring_Panda
but i understand he uses it for safety, but isnt he one of the most powerful person on earth right now?
ch 509 I Am Here to Speak With Your Chairman
Games · MyLittleBrother
im tired of him using a mask and hiding from them! why is he still hiding
ch 509 I Am Here to Speak With Your Chairman
Games · MyLittleBrother
the issue i have with this story is that it is hard to follow. i cant tell if the guy who is playing Alien if he is talking or someone else. its confusing, i was hoping you give the guy who is playing Alien a name, and why are you not letting us see Alien killing all the people? i was hoping we would see more of HIM the ALIEN development. I have watched all the Alien movies and was hoping to see more gruesome stuff that they did in the movies onto this novel. I understand you cant copy all of it, but Alien was lethal creatures. Again i cant tell who is talking is it the Alien or someone else? please give the Alien a NAME..Like you did for the slime
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Sci-fi · AnimeWork