jotun Would be cool
Selkie, Baba yaga, wendigo or many others different onea
TV · GrizzlyCraig
I liked the original as well but I do think a quirky engineer is a good direction.
ch 0 1 Back to the writing board for now.
Video Games · Crimson1997
I think getting the minor abilities would be fine
ch 0 8 Question
TV · RetMod
well this was 2 years ago
The only to I care about are the go to another world and summon another and going to another world is a no in every multiverse jumping novel the home universe us neglected and it becomes a simple jump chain. So that's a no from me dragon prince is a rare world for fanfiction and I'd rather have the story in that world then others that would derail the most important aspect to me. As for summoning It depends on how you do it if you summon the incredible hulk then I would say no but if you summon an a out of the way farmer or minister that is mainly from development of the nation then I would like that as it can be explained of and the focus would remain on the main cast. I get girls from another world are probably what your going for but it also derails the the plot and takes away from the original cast. Just my opinion if you choose not to listen then I look forward to you proving me wrong. Love the story so far.
ch 16 Questions
TV · Sitting_Duck
i like the one without wings
Yes it's one of the fanfics in my list I always check up on and I would love for it to continue.
ch 15 should i keep writing this?
TV · Andrew_Alsbrooks
Interesting direction haven't seen any Wednesday stuff yet.
ch 0 9 Wednesday
TV · Karate_master_b
love the idea you can't stick to one universe when using a non-super world as a base.
ch 14 Bicycle Incident
TV · Karate_master_b
Ya seems very fair at the peak of what Tony stark knew in the mcu it would be way to op.
ch 0 2 (An actual Announcement/Question)
TV · Karate_master_b
For you, next chapter This belongs to Vivori not me "….and here are the ledgers that you asked for my lady," Miloh, the castle's head servant says placing the rather large book that records the general information of the Riverlands. "Thank you," Delianah smiles at the old man who bows at her words. Unlike the high Lords of the Riverlands, the smallfolk rather admire her for her talents and rising from nothing to the unofficial Lord Paramount seeing that Hoster is old and Edmure is still being Edmure. Delianah makes it a point to be kind to them. There is power in gaining the respect of the larger populace. The more you're kind to the downtrodden, the more they'll repay it in the long run. The history of humanity back home has proven this truth time and time again. Sure there is power in gaining the respect of the Lords and Barons of a realm. The true power a king, or in this case, a Lord Paramount might have is however found on the people and Delianah makes it a point to attain that one way or the other. It is however a work in progress and Delianah's long term project. "Your father expressed his intention that you visit him at his solar for the midday meal my lady," Miloh informs her. "I'll be there Miloh, thank you," Delianah smiles at the old man who bows before exiting her solar. Now truly alone, Delianah opens the ledger that contains all the information that she needs about the Riverlands. To have a solution, what she needs is to specifically identify the problems and their root causes. Only then will she be able to tackle it. No point implementing reforms and changes and find out embarrassingly at the end that there's no need for it anyway. If she plans to turn this mud hovel issue that she's changing into something, then she needs to be extra smart about this. It takes Delianah and hour or two to fully peruse the ledger of the past Riverlords. She might have finished sooner but for whatever reason, the previous Riverlords are not exactly the best when detailing their thoughts into paper resulting into a jumbled mess of information that one can only see when dealing with elementary students. As it is, Delianah leans on her rather hard wooden chair only alleviated by some folded robes that she asked the servants to place there before (She makes a mental note to introduce feather filled cushions soon) as her mind starts to think. For hundreds of years under the Targaryen rule, the Tullys' rule of the Riverlands is soft and comfortable. However despite siding with Robert Baratheon during the Rebellion, the influence of the Tullys' are becoming more and more unstable. Bandits and thieves are becoming more prominent in activity thanks to the rather lack of action and implementation of the Master of Laws of Westeros. Inside the Riverlands, there is the continuing power struggle between House Frey and House Mallister who ironically almost have the same power and influence as House Tully. There is also the ever present dispute between the Blackwoods and the Brackens. There's also the silent Targaryen supporters, most notably of all, House Darry who scorns the name of Tully. She doesn't also fails to notice the threat that the overambitious Golden Lion of the West whose influence is like a plague infecting many of the Riverlords, buying off their loyalty piece by piece. There is simply no harmony on the Riverlands with High Lords barely having control of their own lands. Her father, the old Fish is aware of these problems but inability to travel far, old age, past wounds, and lack of family and male support throughout the years has made him quite weak and helpless. Sure he hs tried to restore order but with zero renown, lack of an ace in the hole, and a soft reputation ends his efforts in failure before it even manages to start. Edmure and Brynden are no better as far as she's concerned. Edmure is a man-child who would kiss his reflection on the river if someone dared him and Brynden is a petty outcast who wants no
ch 0 1 Chapter 01
Book&Literature · DaoistFvzgz5
Love the blessing become a curse thing adds so much to the character.
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TV · Daoist611904
No spider focus system
ch 29 Not A Chapter
Marvel: Tech System
Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All