Webnovel Author: cryzsalix - Novel Collection

Thanks for the chapter. Honestly, I'm kind of hoping that she forgets about Regina and leaves her behind. Not only because of how rushed and forced everything happened, but because she doesn't really fit into the protagonist's life. In that sense, Elena makes a lot more sense.

Good job giving it a dose of reality and giving some credit to Dumbledore and the HP school of magic. Many fanfic authors take the easy way out and just make the MC extremely Op, and everything they do is superior to everything they find everywhere they go.

I´m going to let him cook. But, I really hope the protagonist is more than an arrogant addict who doesn't take anything seriously or put any effort into anything. Finally, being this rude to the Cullens seemed a bit much.

A protagonist who cares and is willing to be a father figure? I thought they were extinct.

I´m not even sure if that was rush or just lazy. I still enjoy the history, but this chapter in particular was really bad.

Yeah, it's kind of annoying.

I really like this author's Fanfics, but this one takes the crown. Come on, spider duo, kick these monsters' butts.

The author is an expert in watching the world burn. He first sets it on fire (Oleandra going to the dance with Ron) and then washes his hands of it in the comments at the end. You have my respect author.

Thanks for the chapter. I'm a little confused by what happened in that last scene, but I guess that was the point. Did a dark elf follow her somehow? That can not be good.

I don't know how to feel about Oleandra's constant displays of incompetence and carelessness that even seem to have gotten worse over time. On the other hand, I suppose they are all growth experiences, and this dragon is a very bad matchup for this challenge.

Everything in this chapter made my blood pressure go up. For now I'm going to reserve the negative comments and save my venom for later, and see how everything develops.