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FloSGP

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Correction: her “expression” was

On top of the wall, Nan Hua watched the battle between Long Qian Xing and Heavenly General Bao. There was a faint smile within her eyes and her expressly was very light.

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

FloSGP
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Correction: The cost will be “borne” by those

"We're going through the teleportation gate," Nan Hua said. "These teleportation gates cost a lot to open even once, so it's only used in special time such as war and emergencies. The cost will be born together by everyone in Green Galaxy and those involved in war."

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

FloSGP
Commented

Correction: now they already have a strong

Green Planet has been working hard all these years and countless people were pouring their blood and sweat in order to let Green Planet get stronger. Now, they were already have stronger military force.

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

FloSGP
Commented

Correction: To spend so much on its military

Feng Yu Hua was looking around and clicked her tongue. "I didn't expect Green Planet so spend so much in military."

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

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FloSGP
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Correction: in the slightest “bit”

Feng Ao Kuai and Nan Hua were 'dead,' Nan Luo become a cripple, and there was no mention of Feng Ao Si in the slightest it.

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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FloSGP
Commented

Correction: It should be “eat” well and doing “missions’?

FloSGP
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Correction: interaction and not iteration

"I think we're suitable," Long Qian Xing said stubbornly. He felt his heart constricted when he saw Nan Hua's expression of alienation. It was as if their iteration over the past few months were nothing for Nan Hua.

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

FloSGP
Commented

Correction: “Live or die”

Section 13 is simply a life or die place where it was nothing more than survival to the fullest. 

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

FloSGP
Commented

Correction: take “responsibility”

Thus, other people who wanted Skyfire Planet to take responsibly was silent. Fang Family was even more direct and stated, "If you're afraid of getting beaten up, then don't accept the challenge!"

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

FloSGP
Commented

Correction: “safe” refers to having safety. “save” is used for the act of saving someone.

Ever since she was young, she was taught that the medicine was used to safe people. Even though Luo Qing Wei didn't have much thought when she was young, but she slowly learned many things.

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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Commented

What “urination”???? I don’t think LQX is so crass right???

Old Master Long thought about his grandson's urination and shook his head. If this grandson of his could become much better, he would not worry so much when he was dealing with this brat.

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

FloSGP
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Correction : he is a martial “artiste” or martial arts “practitioner” but he is not martial arts itself

He was already in his fifties and had already felt the decline in his body. As a martial arts and also a bit of medical practitioner, he was naturally aware that his body was no longer as good as he used to be. 

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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Correction: affection to “her” s she is female and not “him” which is male

Yan Xi also asked a few questions about Nan Hua's situation and Nan Hua answered each and every single one of them patiently. It was clear that she was willing to accept Yan Xi's affection to him. 

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

FloSGP
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Correction: it’s “impending” war and not “impeding”.

Nan Hua didn't want to make trouble and made their journey much longer than necessary. The impeding war will start soon and Long Qian Xing and General Jun had to be in the position where they were needed. 

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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FloSGP
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Correction: Acquaintances

But when he heard Long Qian Xing calling his daughter politely, he was also displeased. It was as if what he treasured was not valued by others and instead treated as nothing more than ac quittances.

Astral Flower

Astral Flower

Sci-fi · Sorahana

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Correction: it’s “familial” and not “familiar” relationships

At the same time, he learned how to influence his other cousins to do what he wanted them to do. It might sound despicable, but he knew that it was simply used or being used. There was not much familiar relationship between him and his other cousins, who only wanted to use him as a stepping stone.

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower

History · Sorahana

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