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Congrats and welcome back. I through that you dropped it.

Oh, I didn't see that you started writing chapters again. Welcome back.

Of course we missed you, how could you leave us so long without a single chapter? :)

Thx for the chapter, I really like the real life snippet.

I think it would be interesting to know more of his backstory as we really don't know much but do what you think is best, you are the one planing and writing the story after all.

I don't really mind if the mc become somewhat of a background character as long as there are interesting characters in the foreground (else it feels quite bland) but from what I read it look harder to write. We really don't know much about the mc so I can't really say if I like it or not but there wasn't anything that made me hate it so far. As long as it act in a somewhat consistent way (I mean that his actions make sense related to his background, character and prior experiences) I feels like it is relatable at least to a extent. I think that the cold and detached personality make it easier to write and to follow because you don't need to think much about his emotions, throughs and his relationship with other even if there is less depth to the story. Again a big block of text with my personal point of view which is probably at least partially inaccurate, it look like I am not able to write something short xD.

No need to rush, I very much prefer a good well planned story over a story that was rushed even if the later publish faster. Just take us where you want to go at your own pace.

sorry, I probably won't be able to send it this weekend, I forgot that my father was visiting me and finding information when chapters don't have a title takes so much time.

I'll send it when I'm home, I'm spending the afternoon with my father today.

well, you always need to give the information. As long as it isn't a full chapter of info dump it isn't that annoying.

It isn't very surprising that you didn't find anyone, your novel has A LOT of elements that you don't really see often and is quite unique which is quite confusing at the start but can be great down the line. btw, I appreciate that there is less info dump, I was half expecting that you would list a bunch of options and other things when he discovered the menu to control the k'raws

I still feels that something like "wreak havoc" and letting him choose how to do it would be better but I see why you did it that way. I'll come back later with my theories, I'll need to reread most of the story to note the importants infos.

yeah, the quest is clearly "evil" aligned while I'm pretty sure that chaos gods were defined as neutral, moreover I think you defined chaos as doing what you want to do so it is strange to see a high ranking chaos god imposing such a task to his believers. From what I god, the number that goes with a god title is related to their power, probably reflect their ancienty.

Sure, I'll give them when I take the time to really reflect on them, I'll try to guess about the immortals, the razir and why they are so opposed. (I should be able to get to it this weekend)