Daniel_Morris

1mth

Commented

why is she so stupid?

ch 12 Chapter: 12

ANBU: Card System In Naruto

Anime & Comics · EchoingDusk

Daniel_Morris

2mth

Replied to Jonny_Monny

it is a jincuriki hack

He thought back to his father's words, "When you dispel the clone, all its memories will be transferred to you, and that might cause a huge headache, so try not to dispel multiple clones all at once, especially in the beginning or after a long training session."

Naruto: Uchiha with a Save Point

Anime & Comics · TheDanza

Daniel_Morris

2mth

Posted

mc is a useless waste of space, who doesn't get better for all the chapters I have and I can't stand reading anymore.

MHA: I'm Just A Streamer!

Anime & Comics · YourLocalDealer

Daniel_Morris

3mth

Posted

Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism Plagiarism

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Daniel_Morris

4mth

Posted

Very annoying main character who constantly complains about stuff and blames everything for his problems randomly loudly and often, with side characters who do random stuff and make no sense

DC UNIVERSE: Reborn after the Big Bang

Anime & Comics · David_555

Daniel_Morris

11mth

Posted

Sakura is super nerfed with no explanation and it is extremely annoying it only gets more and more annoying the longer you read. I tried so hard to look past it but I am just unable to ignore the complete frustration reading this book is giving me.

Kunoichi amongst Heroes (mha x naruto) (naruto crossvoer) (bnha)

Anime & Comics · Katsura_369

Daniel_Morris

11mth

Commented

Why did you decide to make her so bloody weak, she can move at like mach 20 and is way way way stronger than allmight not to mention she could just put nomu asleep. Not to mention the several points in the series where she used multiple shadowclones? Is this just a subtle nerf or did I miss something?

ch 0 8 Tipping Scales

Kunoichi amongst Heroes (mha x naruto) (naruto crossvoer) (bnha)

Anime & Comics · Katsura_369

Daniel_Morris

1yr

Posted

Stupid OP character with his powers going in so many directions that some are just meaningless.

A New Life In The Arrowverse

TV · Ezzy_E

Daniel_Morris

1yr

Replied to Azathothgrim

This honestly seems like the best, it both fits in with the world and what he can do while paying homage to Naruto.

'My hero name... What should I pick?' Naruto delves deep into thought, same as the other students.

NotHere

Anime & Comics · ToFFieKop

Daniel_Morris

1yr

Posted

I like the main characters personality enough to get over the slightly annoying grammatical problems, but the story fundamentally suffers from the main character starting as OP and actually get more OP as the story continues. When the character is already unbeatable why add more OP powers?

Absolute Combat: Fanfic

Anime & Comics · Kingo_Tepes

Daniel_Morris

1yr

Commented

is that an Odin reference?

She nodded with a prideful expression "Of course I am! I'm wisdom incarnate, people just can't see that." she chuckled too.

Madara in the Avatar World

Anime & Comics · KojiSan

Daniel_Morris

1yr

Replied to Juhiko

My dude ....... I feel you.

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Kin To Shadows

Anime & Comics · Shanhe11916

Daniel_Morris

1yr

Commented

enjoy your vacation, you have more than earned it.

ch 963 Hogwarts Board Deliberation

A Bend in Time

Book&Literature · EsliEsma

Daniel_Morris

2yr

Commented

Ah yes common sense in the Harry Potter world always brings me joy. Lets just tell preteens not to be stupid around this potentially lethal plant, or creature, or broom.

ch 0 8 Ghosts

Infinity and Magic (Harry Potter Fanfic)

Anime & Comics · ASHARA

Daniel_Morris

2yr

Commented

Haha

ch 107 Chapter 96: Guns n Roses, 1499 CE

Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal

Movies · mark_kiple

Daniel_Morris

2yr

Replied to DarkSlayer

Generic and awesome are not always mutually exclusive

"I need to learn the way of sword. My geeky desires I must fullfil."

HP: I Have "Pure" Magic

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

Daniel_Morris

2yr

Commented

Dropped like a 2 yearold on his birthday, hard and final.

ch 46 Chapter 46

My Hollywood System

Movies · DreamThree

Daniel_Morris

2yr

Posted

Why does the main character constantly get given random new powers that have no build up or proper explanation? Why do none of the characters have any development? Why is the female main character refered to as a he or himself all the time? Why do all the characters from naruto either act stupid or completely contrary to what we saw of their personalities in the series? Why does the story line despite being coherent not actually make much sense? To get all these questions and more stuck in your head read this story!

Reincarnated into Naruto with breathing techniques.

Anime & Comics · patinhoDEUSVULT

Daniel_Morris

2yr

Commented

Look mate I have been enjoying your story and you are clearly a talented writer but at this point the story is just depressing and I can’t continue reading it for my own mental health, I really, truly believe that this story could be improved if their was less focus on the shear artistic misery you are putting your main character through.

ch 0 6 Chapter 6