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Double release!!!! I pledge allegiance. You're the best author-san, you do love your readers!
ch 47 The burden of brothers part two
Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf
As an added bonus, I'll let you in on a secret: The servant of the Secret Fire, wielder of the Flame of Lechers, the Gallant Jiraiya the White shall make his grand and beautiful appearance next chapter. And by God, I'm going to have a fucking blast writing him and Naruto interact, they'll be like gasoline and fire.
Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf
August from Vanitas no carte
He looks to be in thirties. He had dark red hair that goes just past his shoulder, bright yellow eyes with matching yellow sclera, and also a black eye-patch over his right eye. As for his attire he is dressed in a dark suit, and his holding a cane in his grasp.
Dhampir in DxD
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
Author couldn't include a cliffhanger, so they they had to make some MAX hype to torture the readers instead
The elimination fights happen next chapter and I look forward to writing it. The ramifications of multiple Jinchuriki being in one area haven't all occurred yet. The fight with Orochimaru is a warm-up to the main course that happens later. I can guarantee that not one single insert story in this fandom has something like what I have planned.
Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf
Thinking about how the story's going, I can definitely see Rin/Sasuke becoming a thing with how much time they spend together. However, I don't think it'd ever work out. The faux pas of Sasuke naively asking Rin out has kinda let that ship sink. I'd go for Rin/shika now. But! Hear me out here, I can also see Rin/Sasuke being a temporary thing, as in a failed relationship. I think this could be a valid exploration because: maybe Rin is upset after Naruto reveals the truth and becomes a little more unstable/rebellious + trauma from konoha crush, and Sasuke has kinda learnt his lesson from last time, but the forrest arc/crush has traumatised him again, so, Rin & Sasuke both decide to 'get together' as a stupid coping mechanism (maybe it could be a replacement for the Sasuke defection scene/arc? idk) It'd end as an absolute train wreck, but we'd get the funnies of Naruto absolutely freaking out about it. Rin and Sasuke would hurt each other, but eventually they'd break up after learning to respect each other more, somewhat or something ; Sasuke would get to consolidate his Character growth (I don't feel like Sasuke's got resolved satisfyingly after his first try at Rin, he still has so many issues tho), and Rin would learn to be more independent from Naruto, while also getting closer in the aftermath (does that even make sense??) Wow, this is just an idea, but idk, I love the idea of Rin/shika, so maybe he fits into this idea somehow?? after Rin finds out that Sasuke would make a terrible partner. I think something like this would resolve the Rin/sasuke vibes while giving us some more sweet chara development (Rin especially) and your signature combo of angst + Naruto funnies. This is what you get when you ask for suggestions, sorry not sorry XD.
It's either Rin/Sasuke, or it's Rin/Shika in this fic. I like Shikamaru's character and he's been one of my favourite supporting characters so far, hence the attention he's getting with being involved with Naruto friendship wise. Any input or opinion is welcome.
Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf
The work out into the chapter shows, ty. I started out crying, then laughing, then crying again. All round great ending to a great arc.
ch 44 Twilight of the Thunder God part 5
Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf
I've read too many naruto bashing fics lately....seeing him as a normal bro would be cool to read
A question for people, something that I'm undecided on. If my next Naruto insert fic, which will be after I finish the stories I already have planned, has the insert as Sasuke, should I have that insert be paired with a FemNaru, or have him be Bros with regular Naruto?
Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf
Not the comment you asked for, but boy, this chapter got dark. It really makes me think the usual cheery, comedic tone is really just the set dressing to the mc's serious issues. As much as I enjoy the slice of life, I hope we get some serious chapters like this occasionally. The Narutoverse is seriously messed up, like wow.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7
Dog = Cat
Others · Pop_CornDig
Thank you for letting me know that that's a thing, I had a lot of fun looking it up.
I think of the shinobi uniforms as being like the ones from the Naruto stage musical. Feel free to review about what you think will happen next chapter.
Dog = Cat
Others · Pop_CornDig
"this is definitely a flag" sounds like it could be the chapters name
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I came from the authors previous work Villian by circumstance for some relief from the depressing vibes over there, author said it would be more lighthearted, and it's true! Very cute indeed👍 On a more serious note, can't wait for Panda-sama to bring their quality writing style to the Marvel game maker sub-genre. I'm giving 5 stars on the presumption it'll be quality as usual *shrugs
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Many thanks to Bacon for articulating my thoughts on the setting change, it just felt way too early into DxD for a world change *shrugs, but I am intrigued by the idea of an adventure in re:zero and others, using DxD as a 'hub-world'.
ch 30 Dear readers...
A Nephalem's Impossible Path
Anime & Comics · No_Existence
It's really disappointing to see the toxicity of this website striking down yet another talented author. I cannot really refute the people that say that the Tumour plotline was a little out of nowhere, however compared to other novels on this site it's nothing in comparison, so I can get over it. The novel's merits outweigh the bumps in the experience. All the work the author has put into actually establishing their OC character and setting had given me the confidence to continue reading to see where the author will go and try to develop their story, even if it's sometimes poorly executed. The story of an OP MC with inconsequential setbacks, power fantasy route, is worn out, and I'm honestly sick of it. Putting down authors who 'dare to to do something different' on the site is just encouraging people to post bad quality writing and what I'd consider 'trashy power fantasies' that drown out the actually well thought out power fantasies. If you don't like MC's facing any kind of setback, fine, you like what you like. However, it's toxic to pass off novels that don't cater to your specific masculine power fantasies, as 'bad'.
ch 24 Prelude to the Festival
MHA: Psychokinesis
Anime & Comics · KnowingAutumn
Don't know if someone else's suggested already? But how about: Overshadow/ Shade /Vision like these ones because of his dark costume, and because it aludes to his 'mysterious' powers, and his sensory abilities (the cat's already out of the bag) without screaming "I have a Telekinesis Quirk!" But actually, a personal fan of Telekenis'ster: Your friendly neighborhood Pyschic because it's waaay cooler (please don't actually use this name or I will drop)
ch 23 Neurologist (2)
MHA: Psychokinesis
Anime & Comics · KnowingAutumn
Love and hate are two sides of the same coin author-san, and you my friend have a addiction to cliffhangers. A dangerous game, this is.
So, anyway, this is a false cliffhanger because the rest of the chapter is beneath this fake Author's Note. Suckers!
Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf