Man this idea is good, havent seen anyone write about this particular fanfic. i hope you can progress your writing as the you write this. This chapter lacked the original suspense feeling. Its written solely for those whom already read the original novel, even i forgot some of the characters. You can try to add a few more original novel info dumps tho. Just a lil bit.
ch 0 6 Chapter 5
Anime & Comics · Keetarp
now this is really a turn off
i was hoping he would use Joestar as his hero name.
ch 65 Chapter 65
Anime & Comics · blazuki
nvm the upper part. Just read MC did explains about the noise parts.
ch 19 Break up
Anime & Comics · InJustThis
thanks for the chaps, and actually you could make MC explains the situation much better. Such as; since they trapped in a traffic jam with countless people, they bound to make some noise, a loud one, what would you think will happens if such a loud noise coupled with countless people gathered in one area? Till this day i still cant understand why in the anime there werent any zombies coming to the bus, srsly with all those horns theyre basically shouting "We're here mf" lmao
ch 19 Break up
Anime & Comics · InJustThis
I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!! reading this after coming from work is just right.
ch 267 267. A Second Spirit?
Others · DreAm_b0At
thats why, all those shitty popular ranked fics were filled with goddamn harem and badly written lemons. And there are still those kiddos who type 'harem pls harem pls' everywhere. dang it, i was looking forward to every update of this fics. I fkin hope i could find your goddamn story, because if i couldnt. i swear i would be pissed off with those middle-school kiddos.
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Movies · I_am_potato_lord
Im honestly quite disappointed with MC's reward. I want something cool, something powerful yet flashy at the same time, something like the effect you can only get by reaching max lv VIP in those chinese mobile game. You understand me?
ch 1129 Return 2
Anime & Comics · akikan40
if you guys want a big harem, read a goddamn pokemon ff instead.
ch 65 Chapter 9: Infinite Energy
Anime & Comics · PridefulRoyalty
stil cant believe he didnt even check his god damn body after so many weeks.
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This is nice.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5 : 5th Stance
Anime & Comics · OM90
straight to the library~
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 : 3rd Stance
Anime & Comics · OM90
Its a good story nonetheless. But I'm just disappointed, since I'm not into harem anymore. This story is just that good, that makes me feels more disappointment after a while. A good story, great characters, but not my stuff since it heavy focused on the harem and characters building in the early stage of stories.
Multiverse Quest Board
Anime & Comics · meatball_san