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I like it but It could be a bit boring for some people if it stays like this. Create a book where he gets it by coincidence which has the most modern information about Britain Wizard World especially about the school where he can make an improvement on it's curriculum in the future for example; have a guardian that has his best interest in mind where he can give him better guidance in the wizard world and is not influenced with the " Dark and Light families"; develop a good relationship with the globins where they support him in his endeavors like his future sells of products for example, have one good goblin thinker guide him too and tutors that he can hire through them. With this, you could make him more aware and have guidelines to his self improvement. Thankyou for the good work till now.

I'm liking the story so far but I think that there should be improvement in the system. Like giving him personal bonus skills with each improvement to the academy, also you could give Roderick skills that he had before transmigrating so that he could work it to understand magic. The fact that Thane and Elara got together while he was in coma and from what I understood Roderick had a bad part in his relationship with Elara, those 2 should never had done this like It should be. Because after they revealed that they (T&E) were together because of the conversation between both o them and with Roderick, I felt like if he didn't agree with them been together, that they could done something harmful to Roderick 🤔 like betraying him.. I dunno about this but maybe after reading more chapter I can understand why I'm feeling like this. Keep up with the good work BTW 😁