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get well soon!

Agreed, but don’t be too harsh on yourself so far it’s a great read, but yeah there needs to be some resolution to certain characters or new conflicts they are all in a state of limbo after their intro

Both are fine honestly, Wad sounds more of a self insert while Basara is more on brand in the universe. Kinda depends what you want out of the story

thanks for the chapter, really enjoying the pacing so far keep it up

good luck with the drawing, definitely not easy

thank you for your continued effort

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welcome back

agreed this is a cool fight

four options*

ok so something that needs to be clear is what what his goal is when he reincarnated. I just reread the first few chapters to try and figure it out but it’s kinda vague. He doesn’t really have a reason to want to be there. However he did choose high school dxd specifically so it seems like he wanted the harem route. As for ideas of the upcoming story I think there is three options. First continue with atermis and eventually add to the harem (idk really how u would do this because there no lead into it, but you could make mc visit mount olympus for whatever reason). Second, make him start the canon story, like attend kuoh academy just for fun, and he can make his own club or something with ophis and alice, one idea would be that Soma and Rias recognize ophis (like recognize her massive energy) and then are confused as to whose is with ophis aka mc. Just as a way to intreduce more characters. I think this is probably the one that’s easiest to follow up, but you if don’t like the idea that’s fine. Third choice would be maybe since Ophis is involved with the khaos brigade, mc thinks they are manipulating her and he decides to wipe them out. That includes Baraquiel (i think he part of it). Then that leads angels, fallen angels, and devils to look for mc. (i recognized as i wrote this it wasn’t a great idea). Finally one that could work is, ophis and alice want to go on walks with mc right, they get bored of kuoh so u take them to go see heaven ( treating heavan like a park) from there micheal and gabriel get scared of ophis and appear in front of mc. Gabriel prolly really likes cute things and hugs ophis as she looks like a child. From there i don’t really know but its a way to introduce Gabriel (for harem). I wrote this all as i came up with it, im not saying u have to use any of these, but hopefully they can help you come up with something. I also recommend maybe rewriting the first few chapters to make the story have more of a goal. Ok that was excessively long sorry about it Cya

i haven’t read your novel in months… sorry got busy. but i’m i just caught up and i’m very happy that u kept writing. thanks for the chapter

i like it, sets up an interesting story that’s a little more down to earth than this current fanfic. I think if you feel inspired you should write it