Honestly pacing seems perfect.
Also, is the pacing too fast? Should I slow it down?
Anime & Comics · PyteWriter
Thought that was doom.
He's definitely a genius... but I doubt I could take on someone like Darkseid with his suits.
Anime & Comics · Sothisq
If he can shape himself when he becomes light or just control it he can either make an illusion of himself but older( or maybe some random adult) or use hard light to do the same and if he needs more details to set up the account. He could steal a wallet to get something to put down or maybe bribe someone at the bank. But that wasn’t said in story so I don’t know how exactly.
First, he drove the RV to the vicinity of Yekaterinburg, found a safe way to scrap the RV, and then blew it up with a laser. Then he entered the city alone and went to a car dealership, purchased a car through a phone order, transferred money through his account, and completed the transaction.
Movies · RONIN_AROY
Truly great story.
ch 85 Chapter 85: The End
Anime & Comics · blazuki
Great chapter. I can’t remember though is Eloise 100 percent accurate with her predictions
ch 182 Chapter 181: Eloise isn't Striaght
Movies · Ozonelayer
+1
How many of you are still reading this fanfiction? Type, +1. Can I get 100 comments? Who knows?
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
Great chapter. Didn’t see the demon coming back this way. How did he get around Roy’s deal?
ch 288 Call of the Crossroads
Video Games · Leohart
Thanks for the chapter. It is interesting at least for me to see the mcs origins fully. Also want to see how he brings up how he world hops cus I dont believe the specific how’s have been mentioned to the other members.
ch 38 The Life of Jon Snow pt1
Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
Nice chapter. Honestly can’t wait to see where things go from here.
ch 227 Chance Encounter
Video Games · Leohart
He might not know.
'Yep, that does it. I don't think that I am ever going to have children of my own, at least not in the next few centuries.'
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
Can’t wait for more chapters. This was and still is a very interesting story.
ch 29 Woes of Heroes
Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
Maybe he got some inspiration from kreigs armor after gohan took it and let him go over it.
"That stung, you b$txh," shouted Nami. "It was supposed to do much more than that! What the hell is your body made of?" Miss Doublefinger shouted back. "That's it! I've had enough of your needles. Thunder," shouted Nami as she pointed the tip of Clima-Tact at her. Sparks started to generate from the tip. "Thunder Gatling," said Nami and started attacking Miss Doublefinger with the tip of Clima-Tact at high speed.
Anime & Comics · Kai_sensei
Thanks for the chapter can’t wait for more.
ch 41 Krakoa
Anime & Comics · king_frosh
To actually come out and start talking about his origins took guts. The lead up to it was pretty good too. Now is he going to go into him knowing a potential future from a novel or not. That is something I want to know.
"Hello, Lily, my name is Rudeus Greyrat. But it wasn't always. Once upon a time it was… well, that doesn't matter. First thing first; I was born on a planet called Earth…"
Anime & Comics · Crownedclown
I think it’s mister sinister that mainly does cloning and consciousness transfer. Of course there r other mutants whose abilities r to make clones and scientists who do it to in marvel.
Shaw's frantic flailing slowly began to slow, before ceasing entirely, his eyes losing the crazed intelligence it once possessed. With a sad sigh, the little Kinetic energy dissipated into the air, signalling the passing of a once proud mutant. One of the most prominent members of the Hellfire Club, an Alpha-level mutant, was dead.
Anime & Comics · Marine0IQ
Really liking the story so far. Reallly want to see what’s up with the family crest in more depth soon.
ch 61 Chapter 61: The End and a Beginning
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
Technically since it was a majority vote I thinks it’s a democracy.
Akira : "This is a dictator..."
Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin
Great chapter. Kind of wonder if he is going to move out of the house with everything that happened.
ch 72 Chapter 72 A Memory
Konoha: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444