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2018-11-11 Joined Global

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Merry Christmas!

ch 71 Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

Video Games · Abi_Daulen

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"kept quiet" not "kept quite"

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"he stared at me", not "I stared at me"

I stared at me in shock. Was it shock? It was kind of hard to tell when he only had one eye. Then, he did something completely unexpected. He hugged me. I smiled and hugged him back. "Okay Rin," he said. 

Naruto: Resilience

Naruto: Resilience

Anime & Comics · MelonChan1205

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Obito not Obiot

He frowned and stared at your and. I walked up to him and grabbed it. He flinched and tried to pull away. "Stop being depressed!" I declared, "You're squandering your potential. Instead of sitting around moping, you should train harder. That way you can become stronger and protect the people you love. You can avenge Minato-sensei and Obiot. Make them proud…" my voice ended in a whisper. 

Naruto: Resilience

Naruto: Resilience

Anime & Comics · MelonChan1205

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a crowd of soccer fans? lol

There was a commotion downstairs, as if a crowd of soccer fans had arrived. I left VJ to keep an eye on Ciri and Sweers. I headed downstairs. In the hall were two squads of Trappers, sat at a common table and ordered a beer, but the leaders sat separately and discussed something.

Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team

Video Games · Abi_Daulen

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a bribe?

"He kid," Ryuto called out. I turned just in time to see him toss me a kunai through the air. It moved so slow I could easy snatch it out of the air. I looked at it, shiny iron kunai. I blinked and looked at him, Ryuto shrugged, "consider it a bride. Don't come back here until you're ten, got that?".

(..x..)

(..x..)

Anime & Comics · UchihaMadara_sama

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"lets me think"

I blinked, "ah, I like it here. Let's me think."

(..x..)

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Anime & Comics · UchihaMadara_sama

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Wards, not wars!

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V!

"Well, there is this woman; she lives in the building with us. She was recently promoted as an executive in the Intelligence division," Yuki began, and I didn't need to ask him whose Intelligence Division. Basically, only Arasaka employees lived in this building. Yuki paused, "Long story short, your arrival was somewhat unexpected, and you snagged the last AV pad on this side of the building out from under her. She had been planning on purchasing or leasing an AV since his promotion."

Skitterdoc 2077

Skitterdoc 2077

Video Games · SpiraSpira

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Should it be Kabuki instead of Kubiki?

As he ate, I said, "You also need to judge better the prices you charge your clients. You charge clients an upfront fee based on their distance, but you pay your couriers based on how many minutes it takes them to make the delivery. They're not really screwing you, but you have no system in place for variable pricing during rush hour or identifying delivery areas that are particularly burdensome for one reason or another." I just shrugged, "You lose money on most deliveries to Kubiki, for example. By distance, it isn't that far, but you have to, on average, change trains two times for most addresses just due to the way the NCART is set up. So the delivery times add up. You need to switch from a pure distance-calculated price to a price based on the historical average delivery times both for that destination and also for that time of day. This means you need to keep many more records and use many more spreadsheets." Or maybe hire a computer nerd to write him some custom software.

Skitterdoc 2077

Skitterdoc 2077

Video Games · SpiraSpira

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