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Hey Author, I am not sure about the missing element but I find that the transition from Matt Kong's story to Qian Qian's story was not smooth. I was confused when I had read Qian Qian's first chapter and I had to go back to reading all chapters as well as the summary. P.s.: Loved the stories of the 3 Long brothers as well as your writing style. P.p.s.: Looking forward to Matt Long's story.
ch 28 A Review?
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Hey Author, I am not sure about the missing element but I find that the transition from Matt Kong's story to Qian Qian's story was not smooth. I was confused when I had read Qian Qian's first chapter and I had to go back to reading all chapters as well as the summary. P.s.: Loved the stories of the 3 Long brothers as well as your writing style. P.p.s.: Looking forward to Matt Long's story.
ch 28 A Review?
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General · har_k