omegamon

11mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. It could be cool if MC learn from zatana too. To me her unique way to use magic would be a good mach in a world that wizards use latin to chant. She is also a powerful witch that make the impossible many times too.

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omegamon

11mth

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Mc can go to college and find a hidden coven composed by college students. It could be cool if he could talk with his ancestors and use expression magic and psych powers like Bennie and new Orleans witch magic. He could try to explore the world of gods too. They appeared in the end season of legacies. I think a character like zatana from DC or karma taj sorcery from marvel is a good reference to develop Mc magic too.

ch 13 Idea

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

omegamon

1yr

Commented

It could be cool if each wifi has a different job like doctor, treasure hunter, archeologist... It is important to study well one of this jobs if MC wants to go to the dark continent or get a god position in hunter association.

ch 0 6 Notice

Hunter x Hunter: Six Paths of Nen

Anime & Comics · JustAMan

omegamon

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. I think MC will not get the joy to overcome his limits. His wish already give the power level, abilities and knowledge from that character. I do not know if he can surpass him. I also think that he is too OP for Ho universe.

ch 0 4 Hermione and Phoenix

HP: Lucifer MorningStar

Others · LuciFer_KarDam

omegamon

1yr

Commented

When you are free you could try to note your ideas without writing your chapter. You could try to think the development of his martial soul, what technique MC could train. What fortuitous encounter.. make a list of spiritual skills for his martial souls.

ch 14 Question

DD: Heavens P

Anime & Comics · Gherman_Sparrow13

omegamon

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Will you make him establish the master teacher occupation in douluo dalu ??

ch 0 1 Chapter 17 : A Little Stronger

NCR

Anime & Comics · Gherman_Sparrow13

omegamon

2yr

Commented

Thanksf. Author I liked the domain powers martial soul, soul rings with a beat spirit, soul bones, battle armor, the blacksmith techniques , domain and weapon realms , realms for soul strength , purple eye technique ,mecha, divine weapon and the god trials from douluo. It.couldn be very interesting too see it in ATG. I think ATG has a batter cultivation system. Could be interesting combine the two systems. He could build a divine realm to achieve the god level in ATG. MC has the dragon god bloodline. I think it has the same power as the evil god. so he could get Yun che technique.

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Yuan Zun: Yoriichi Tsukiguni

Anime & Comics · Descendent

omegamon

2yr

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Thanks for the chapter. I think the seal name is yin seal and the technique Tsunade use to power up her taijutsu is strength hundred seal ... Some says that seal is just for women and that seal is the key to summon katsuyu. Sakura needed 3 years to make the seal appear. J think Boruto does not have so much chakra because he can only do 4 clones when Naruto could do a lot more without using Kurama chakra his age

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A New Leaf: Rebirth in the Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · Taidanotsumi

omegamon

2yr

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Thanks for the chapter. I would like to understand better why he act this way with his family. It does not make sense to me. The only thing I can see wrong in his family is that his dad worked a lot when he became Hokage. However it does not justify why he treat his family this way

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A New Leaf: Rebirth in the Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · Taidanotsumi

omegamon

2yr

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Thanks for the chapter.With all his ultimate skills I think he had knowledge about all techniques from Shinobi world. I did not like that he traveled to fate world and get magical power. I think the chakra power is underestimate. The mangekyou Sharingan and Kurama clan and yin yang release had the power to rewrite reality. kaguya get the power to travel dimensions and immortality. He could develop well his ninja skills and get the otsutsuki level. I did no like that he get a harem so easily. You could write a status page with his techniques

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omegamon

2yr

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to me one of the problems is the cliche from chinese novels,,, he acts like a xinxia MC that resolved his problems killing. He does not develop his skills step by step he get OP powers without the need to learn and experience. I see the development of ninjas as a systematical way but he already get the final result. How to develop a character this way if his powers was gifted to him without working hard for them 11min