Werring

1yr

Posted

While the premise of the story is interesting and sometimes quite humorous, I had to drop it. The grammar is just abhorrent. Having English as a second language, doesn't prevent you from using a spelling & grammar checker (ms word, open office, Google docs)

The Only Aura User In Magic World

Fantasy · asuya

Werring

1yr

Commented

while a lot of people "complain" about this being illogical, keep in mind that this is the reasoning of a 13 year old (without much parental guidance). So you shouldn't expect perfect reasoning from him.

Thinking about his cured eyes was delightful but on the downside, Jason couldn't read. Once everyone including his teachers would know that his vision had magically returned and that he could now see perfectly well, he would have to sit for a normal written exam like every other student. He wouldn't be granted the AI's assistance anymore that was normally given to children with special needs. Without the AI, he wouldn't know what was written on the holographic screen.