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Fantasy · Artkairther
Yeah, Alessia didn't even have one of her own!
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Fantasy · Artkairther
She is already here, but it takes a Yandere to fall in love first to reveal their nature. >:D
ch 11 Alessia's Proposal
Fantasy · Artkairther
I think a better way to explain this is by example. (The scale is not like this in a story, this is just an explanation.) for example: from 10->11 strength, you can lift 10 KG more, so it costs only 10 points. But from 90->91 strength, you can lift 10 Tons more, so it costs more points.
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Fantasy · Artkairther
Yes.
[The 100 is your body limit, biologically.]
Fantasy · Artkairther
Really? I think it should have one now.
ch 0 7 The beginning of his new story
Fantasy · Artkairther
Make the front tilt up a bit so the horse can pull forward.
"We can try replacing one wheel from the front to this, then use some weight counterbalance, so its center of gravity is at the back; this way, the cart can still move but needs the horse to pull a lot more weight."
Fantasy · Artkairther
The kid is ok (with some major burn), but Seth is not...
ch 0 2 A heroic choice
Fantasy · Artkairther
This is him before he transmigrated.
1) Seth Anderson: The Heroic System user. [MC]
Fantasy · Artkairther
Bang
"The first magic spell is called 'Black Bullet'. It's like shooting a bullet from a gun, but in this case, the bullet is magic and the gun is your hand."
Fantasy · MyLittleBrother
you mean the best kind?
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Fantasy · The_POZ
what?
"No… Ning Yue, please. Don't twist my words, just go around asking for a punch so you can punch them back is not a good idea."
Eastern · Artkairther
oh, it's called "kowtow" thank you! I looking for the word everywhere!
"No! It was my fault, father, I knew I shouldn't hit him, but he has bad-mouthed me, so I…"
Eastern · Artkairther
Fixed. 6ft should be when he is around 15.
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Eastern · Artkairther
Thank!
ch 11 A fight invitation
Eastern · Artkairther
1st master: Hou Yi (Master Yi)
Eastern · Artkairther
It goes to my re-write list. Most of the detail is too much, and I must rework Ning Yue's personality a bit.
ch 16 Bested the copper bull
Rise of the Heaven-Shattering Fist
Eastern · Artkairther