Despite the Webnovel's usual format, this story reads more like it came from one of the forums. The storytelling is great, no cheat system but actual magic is present. Your worldbuilding isn't on par with the original but still quite close. I think, it just needs a few more chapters. Overall this is great.
ch 27 Through Glass Eyes
Book&Literature · KojiSan
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ch 27 Through Glass Eyes
Game of Thrones: The First Elven King
Book&Literature · KojiSan