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"He held the HOOD and browsed through the ... " - you mean PHONE, right? @.@

OMG The mother of all cliffhangers @.@

I really really hope that translator is not taking another hiatus... after last break with no chapters, I've just started to enjoy this novel again.. -.-

I don't quite agree with you. He (the ancestor) could've explained the situation about these two types of beasts in 1-2 sentences. I feel it's too drawn out. There would be no lack of world building if he explained the situation first, instead of inserting her amazement, repeat of his statements in the form of questions and her wonder over every second of his speech. I feel it would be like math teacher explaining 2+2=4 to a grownup in the form of: Teacher: Hi, so, hi, you see, there is a number 2. Imagine now that there are 2 of them. Student: Really? Two of the two? Amazing T: Yes, yes, amazing I tell you. S: Ok T: Now that's not all. There is actually ... S: Really, there's more? What? What? T: Well, there's an operator "+". If you use it in the form of 2+2 you get something S: Oooooh, you get something. T: Yes, it's number 4! S: WOW How do you prove this? T; Ho ho ho I am not at that level, I only know it like everybody else knows it S: Yes Yes everybody knows it Well, that's my opinion at least. Also, in the last 3 chapters, there were numeral mentions how Lin family won't let her go, which is ok when different people say it in diff situations, but not ok for author to continuously explains in many many words how Lin fam is tyrannical in addition to the dialog.. like, we get it Again, my opinion. I really really like the idea and the setup of the novel. Writing style, not so much.

What a filler.. pretty much the whole chapter could've been written in 2-3 sentences... chapters are already outrageously short and when filler comes up, it's really annoying -.-

She feels sorry for ruining Yuan's childhood but feels nothing for doing the same for her own daughter, humpf >[

Marvelous chapter! Thank you very much, author!

Same... but I still can't wait to read it xD

Note: Wolves move in "packs" and cattle in "herds" :)