Hmm, I thought it wasn't a translation, what a shame....................................................................................................
George R. R. Martin once said that he doesn't like fan fiction because authors tend to make characters behave in ways they would never behave. Your portrayal of Diogenes perfectly represents Martin's mindset. I'm just giving one example of many. Another annoying thing is the MC's stupid willpower ability, based on Pantheon's convenient ability. You had done a good job building up the MC's abilities. But you ruined it.
I hope you understand that these punishments are ridiculous. Ten lashes can kill a man, and if you leave them without food for three days, it is a 100% certain death.
"No food for the next three days. Twenty-five lashes each. They are to be tied to the post for twenty-four hours," he ordered, his voice even.
Mortal(God of War)
Video Games · ValikMurigov
And what is the explanation for using a fire jutsu against a water jutsu? Moreover, a C-rank jutsu against an A-rank jutsu. And in an environment surrounded by water.
The fireball collided with the water, steam exploding outward in a violent hiss that swallowed the clearing. For a moment, both shinobi vanished behind the thick veil of steam. But only one was panting.
Kakashi: Godless Ascension
Anime & Comics · Roi_tre001
The forced and poorly constructed romance almost ruins this story, at least in my opinion. I recommend this story only if you don't mind feeling embarrassed for others. The rest of the story isn't bad, but it's not excellent either.
Besides being a weakling
I could have gone south but I didn't want to get anywhere near Los Angeles in fear that Lucifer was running around there.
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
I thought you would make me reincarnate as Kagome.
Hitogami doesn't have those powers, so I guess he only discovered Gojo when he just reincarnated and took credit for the feat?
"Stop her, quickly!"
Playing Airbender (Legend of Korra SI)
Anime & Comics · blazuki
Now that I think about it, how much money is 100 million in this fanfic?
Playing Airbender (Legend of Korra SI)
Anime & Comics · blazuki