Aiore

14d

Commented

The flow is off. This feels more like diary reading than storytelling. There is no real dialogue and it feels like a listing of events.

ch 19 CHAPTER 19

SIGNING IN: BEING SHOWERED BY HEAVENLY BLESSINGS FOR FIVE YEARS

Urban · GEEGEE

Aiore

17d

Replied to Andagam

Elder Sister, She is very rich. On 69shuba. They were correct on how to use google lens to search after screenshotting.

The Wealthy Eldest Sister Rules Supreme

General · Tea Warm

Aiore

1mth

Commented

From* Run through grammarly.

'Raven' the Twilight Dark Elf of 'S.Tigris' group steps forward and said. "Heh, Do you think that we from 'Wing's Alliance' are afraid of you Scums form 'HeadHunter Guild'?"

Child of Destiny

Games · ProudMonkey

Aiore

1mth

Commented

I uh read that as “nalgas” first… reread it. Yea… nagas my bad 🤗 lol

Each race had subraces within them and each of them had their own racial traits. The main races were Elves, Beastmans, Undeads, Nagas and Human race.

I've read a lot of books, played a lot of games, and studied economics for fun in school. The economics for this book is off. I would lose a zero when quoting prices or change the currency to reflect a wider denomination range. Coppers, Silvers, and Gold versus only gold. It does not make sense that gold would be readily available to farmers and most citizens while considered "poor" compared to nobles.

"For the barn, since I will be making sure it will be big and spacious and with room for upgrade as well, I will only charge 7,000 gold for the material which would add up to the initial cost of the barn with a total of 17,000 gold. As for the chicken coop, since I don't need it to be that big, you only needed to pay me 4,000 gold for the materials, and with the cost of 5,000, in total for the chicken coop, you will pay me 9,000 gold."

A Single Mother's Farm of the Gods

Fantasy · Kyosei

Aiore

2mth

Commented

As I read this…

[Happy Fat Water (Cola) 250 ml +1]

The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life

Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling

Aiore

2mth

Commented

I wish for the cost the chapters were longer… I mean I can read the chapters in under a minute. I don’t expect a novel but do wish it was longer considering the cost is the same as many other novels but these have fewer words.

ch 84 Recalling

Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

Aiore

2mth

Commented

Author.. This was definitely triggering… Have you experienced depression like this? Too close to home.

The rainfall was heavy by this time as Asher got out of his seat and closed the door behind. He rushed over and pulled open the door to Abigail's seat only to see the woman sitting there, staring blankly ahead with tears streaming down her cheeks.

The Villainess Married The Evil CEO

Urban · Pinkyprincess

Aiore

3mth

Commented

Ah a ML who isn’t otherworldly handsome.

A man sat on a bench that was placed around the circular terrace at the center of the mall. He wore a set of black clothes. Black shirt, slacks, jacket and rubber shoes, everything was black colored. Even the loose beanie he wore over his unkempt almost shoulder length hair was black. His face was average looking. He had uneven sized eyes which would give other people a different impression of him depending on which side they of his face they were looking at. His right eye looked a little sleepy while the other looked quite sharp. His nose was quite tall and was slightly wider than average but it complimented his long slightly pointed face.

Mutagen

Sci-fi · Exallion

Aiore

4mth

Replied to MelBri

mimis is sleep. back in the day they used the word "mi" as the sound you make when you sleep. so mimis is like zzz.

I shrugged my shoulders, not really caring. I had long accepted that my body did things differently compared to the average person. It was not my fault that sometimes energy drinks would make me sleep. "Well, there is a third option where my body has had so much caffeine that it starts to reject it, and I get sick to my stomach after drinking it."