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The story started very well, at least until a certain point it was great! But after he started the simulations in Demon Slayer, things gradually got worse, the protagonist showed very retarded characteristics and in the most recent chapters this became even more concrete, he doesn't have the slightest bit of deep personality. He's basically a Beta who thinks he's chad...

I don't know how anyone likes this type of insufficiently immersive story, full of countless negative points that ruin the story for me. Well, there's no debate about taste, I didn't like it, but you might like it.

One of the worst Highschool DxD stories I've ever read in my entire life. There are so many negative points that I would spend hours writing here, so I'll summarize. I don't recommend wasting your time with this shit....

I've read some bad Agianst The Gods stories, but this one is by far the worst I've ever seen, why? Simple, the protagonist is ordinary, has no knowledge of the world he is in, doesn't have a captivating personality and seems like an ignoble person without salvation. The characters are also not faithful to the novel, it looks more like Ocs than anything, in short, don't waste your time...

That wouldn't even be the problem, but simply the stupidity of the author himself who knows nothing about cultivation trying to write about it. And the horribly made Ocs...

I really liked the different vision from other DxD stories, with the protagonist training and living among the Yokai faction, a shame that everything was poorly applied and too superficial to arrest anyone, but what ruined it for me was the fact that he taught his skills to everyone as if he were handing out sweets. It's pure naivety on the part of the protagonist, I don't particularly like this type of story. But this is just my particular and sincere taste for this review, in general the story could be good for you, my dear companions.

Firstly, I didn't attack, I gave my honest opinion about a “bad” story, to prevent people from wasting their precious time on such a thing. And you're right about it being a fanfiction, but this also reflects on the author's writing ability, making it clear that it is mediocre to the point that even a twelve year old child could do better. And finally, I don't care what you think, do or think... Have a great week, mediocre writer.

All I can say is that the author is a fucking pedophile. He made the protagonist consider marrying a 12 or 13 year old child, and yes, that is Honoka Shirahama's age at the beginning of the story. Apart from the fact that none of his characters have any depth, the direction of the story is honestly disappointing, I strongly recommend that you don't waste your time.

Twenty-eight years old, a fat guy who lives with his parents, eats Cheetos and jerks off — is that what you meant? Since only someone like that would write this kind of story. Logical answer? All is well then. How about the lack of depth in all the characters, an inconsequential protagonist who acts one way and then another? Lack of detail or realism? Want more?

There are bad One Piece stories, and there is this one that is the extreme culmination of them. There are so many negative points that I would spend hours writing here, but I will just say one, he shares the powers he gains from the System, character models and such, with other people. Proving that the author is no more than fourteen or fifteen years old, because it is very naive of him to do so — it does not make the realistic point of being betrayed in the future.

I couldn't read it after twenty chapters. Characters without the slightest depth, low understanding of strength in the world of Bleach and One Piece by the author, how can a guy who reaches galaxy level with at least fifty percent of the power not be as strong as an admiral? It doesn't make any sense...

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Overall, the story started off very well, but as the story went on, you could see the author's lack of sense of direction. He gave the protagonist a system only to take it away later, what's the reason? There is no logical explanation... Another point here that highlights this is that there has been a huge development in the system and its functions of 'picking up' girls. Anyway, apart from the story's lack of direction, there is the protagonist's unconsciousness. He doesn't have the same depth as all the other characters. If he is going to read it, he reads it at his own risk. But I don't recommend it, as it will waste valuable time that you could spend on better stories or your personal life.