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My opinion? The story had good potential, but it started to fall apart the moment other characters were introduced, becoming... A complete disappointment, why? Their depth is non-existent, their personality is not well developed, and above all... I feel as if I was seeing an ignoble person with a superior complex when seeing the protagonist and his attitudes, in addition, he has a naivety that irritates me, teaching and basically giving power to other characters, any of which can betray you when considering that Gods have mental manipulation in their hands... Sigh, anyway, the last part is just my personal opinion and not that of a reader like the rest... ..

Perhaps the author deleted my review, which he does a lot. So, I'll give you a summary, this is the worst Naruto story anyone could create, the worst? It's the author's idiocy regarding Cultivation, he doesn't know anything and tries to do something with his meager knowledge.

Honestly, there are points in this story that are good, but the negative points take away any possible shine. Firstly, the protagonist has no personality, where is the trait of stubbornness or pride that made him refuse to be entertainment for a God when he became a servant? Another thing is its childishness and stupidity, added to the lack of depth, makes this story bad.

The story started very well, at least until a certain point it was great! But after he started the simulations in Demon Slayer, things gradually got worse, the protagonist showed very retarded characteristics and in the most recent chapters this became even more concrete, he doesn't have the slightest bit of deep personality. He's basically a Beta who thinks he's chad...

I don't know how anyone likes this type of insufficiently immersive story, full of countless negative points that ruin the story for me. Well, there's no debate about taste, I didn't like it, but you might like it.

One of the worst Highschool DxD stories I've ever read in my entire life. There are so many negative points that I would spend hours writing here, so I'll summarize. I don't recommend wasting your time with this shit....

I've read some bad Agianst The Gods stories, but this one is by far the worst I've ever seen, why? Simple, the protagonist is ordinary, has no knowledge of the world he is in, doesn't have a captivating personality and seems like an ignoble person without salvation. The characters are also not faithful to the novel, it looks more like Ocs than anything, in short, don't waste your time...

That wouldn't even be the problem, but simply the stupidity of the author himself who knows nothing about cultivation trying to write about it. And the horribly made Ocs...

I really liked the different vision from other DxD stories, with the protagonist training and living among the Yokai faction, a shame that everything was poorly applied and too superficial to arrest anyone, but what ruined it for me was the fact that he taught his skills to everyone as if he were handing out sweets. It's pure naivety on the part of the protagonist, I don't particularly like this type of story. But this is just my particular and sincere taste for this review, in general the story could be good for you, my dear companions.

Firstly, I didn't attack, I gave my honest opinion about a “bad” story, to prevent people from wasting their precious time on such a thing. And you're right about it being a fanfiction, but this also reflects on the author's writing ability, making it clear that it is mediocre to the point that even a twelve year old child could do better. And finally, I don't care what you think, do or think... Have a great week, mediocre writer.

All I can say is that the author is a fucking pedophile. He made the protagonist consider marrying a 12 or 13 year old child, and yes, that is Honoka Shirahama's age at the beginning of the story. Apart from the fact that none of his characters have any depth, the direction of the story is honestly disappointing, I strongly recommend that you don't waste your time.

Twenty-eight years old, a fat guy who lives with his parents, eats Cheetos and jerks off — is that what you meant? Since only someone like that would write this kind of story. Logical answer? All is well then. How about the lack of depth in all the characters, an inconsequential protagonist who acts one way and then another? Lack of detail or realism? Want more?

There are bad One Piece stories, and there is this one that is the extreme culmination of them. There are so many negative points that I would spend hours writing here, but I will just say one, he shares the powers he gains from the System, character models and such, with other people. Proving that the author is no more than fourteen or fifteen years old, because it is very naive of him to do so — it does not make the realistic point of being betrayed in the future.