Reistlan

3mth

Commented

He collect his gfs for whole chptr. Chapter like this i call empty.

ch 165 Chapter 165: assembled at the room of requirements

Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System

Movies · souryourer

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to jahmii

And use doppelganger/illusion always=\

ch 23 Prelude to War

MARVEL: GODSPEED

Movies · David_555

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to jahmii

Yeah - loki god. God of magic, tricks,fools and lies. But even in canon he didn't use magic beside illusion. He use knives coz' asgard honor only warriors. So magic - job for weak ppl. He wanna be great. So he use weapons 99% of time. Banner can't knew about speedforce. Why? Coz' there was said that no speedforce avatar 2000 years. So... He just can't. Reason know ao? When he first time use sf she must go to he. And explain if he would play with time she teleport him to other planet/plan. She(he if comix version) go with herself plan. And if he destroy it - would be pity.

ch 23 Prelude to War

MARVEL: GODSPEED

Movies · David_555

Reistlan

7mth

Posted

English not my language - i read and write with autotransplantation. Writing Quality 4 - coz i cant say wrong or write. Updating Stability 3- this book only 3 day in my library and cant mark it better Story Development 1 - start and idea of ff - great. But so many holes on the plot... Sory i can't mark ZERO. Character Design - mc is bs. He chnge his mind from nothing. world background - too many holes. Bruce banner - knew about speedforce, but dont about stones. Stark and oscorp make particle accelerators ... Noone from them - can't do this coz' oscorp - biopharmaceutical, and stark not in this branch of science. If it make otto octavius would be better. Author give mc speedforce and give it nerf already after few chapter. (Yeah i can't say about rpg) When mc go for help - stark make costume with VIBRANIUM.... When they stop tesserakt - create blackhole.... After loki kill all family just take his hand.... Go to 616.... Just drop. Too many bs for me.

MARVEL: GODSPEED

Movies · David_555

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to SOMMO_ARCANO

I can stay arrogant for 99% of bs mtl. But this..... I dropped on travel to 616. So many shit on one book - rare for me.

MARVEL: GODSPEED

Movies · David_555

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to jahmii

Ok, banner knew about speedforse, loki can use magic not knives. Why mc can't knew ancient one?

ch 23 Prelude to War

MARVEL: GODSPEED

Movies · David_555

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to xbch

Very bad. Author don't wanna say that you bad writer, but i read ~20 mcu(comix)xDC(comix) and noone author can't do this adequate.

ch 15 Defeating the Avengers

MARVEL: GODSPEED

Movies · David_555

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to daniel_rahn

Seriously?.... Telekinesis can create invisible "aura" that can stop all stuff... Alien power - not panacea. Yeah, they have more variety... But telekinesis - one from most variety power.

ch 70 Chapter 70: Meeting the Crush and Bully

Gantz Relife

Others · Thundertroy

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to daniel_rahn

You think this abilities isn't consuming stamina?

ch 70 Chapter 70: Meeting the Crush and Bully

Gantz Relife

Others · Thundertroy

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to daniel_rahn

.... Telekinesis - isn't supernatural??? Teleportation?

ch 70 Chapter 70: Meeting the Crush and Bully

Gantz Relife

Others · Thundertroy

Reistlan

7mth

Commented

When this bs will finish?

ch 68 Chapter 68: Dwindling Down the Targets

Gantz Relife

Others · Thundertroy

Reistlan

7mth

Commented

Read this.... Reread again.... Decide to drop.

ch 63 Chapter 63: Story Behind The Yokai

Gantz Relife

Others · Thundertroy

Reistlan

7mth

Commented

I just wanna skip all of this useless fightings and descriptions. 2 chapters of them.

ch 59 Chapter 59: Fighting Many Snakes

Gantz Relife

Others · Thundertroy

Reistlan

7mth

Replied to Gabichu_Yeah

Yeah, but ino isn't born yet, so who know maybe she will be third?))))

Uchiha With Glasses

Anime & Comics · Lessa_Grace

Reistlan

7mth

Commented

Where is chapter?...

ch 0 8 Chapter 08: Lesson

Naruto: Let the World Feel the Pain

Anime & Comics · BlackGoku222

Reistlan

7mth

Commented

.... 2 chapters... But info = half of one. First chapter 85% of emotions and description.... If it was few sentences - was be better. Second.... No comments.

This book has been deleted.

Reistlan

7mth

Commented

...... Before this chapter this story was great... But now... Too many no adequate move. When he see that he can't transform - why he didn't avada her for a moment????

ch 57 Chapter 56: The Darkhold