Badges 6
Moments 395
I would say the affinity and approval parts make things feel like a game which is fine if that’s What you are going for but I personally feel it would be better without it and maybe the dice part to. It’s your story do you what you want. This is just my opinion
ch 0 4 Assembling a party P.2
The Strongest(Baldur's Gate 3)
Video Games · Son_Karuto
Cool btw I do think the fic will be better if you ditch some of game elements. Keep up the great work
ch 0 4 Assembling a party P.2
The Strongest(Baldur's Gate 3)
Video Games · Son_Karuto
Do you plan on having other jjk characters in this story
ch 0 4 Assembling a party P.2
The Strongest(Baldur's Gate 3)
Video Games · Son_Karuto
Tftc
ch 0 4 Assembling a party P.2
The Strongest(Baldur's Gate 3)
Video Games · Son_Karuto
Great chapter i feel Ron going to keep same mistake he did with Amelia
ch 30 Chapter 30 - What’s Better Than Chocolate? Two Chocolates! II
Star Of The Weasley Family
Book&Literature · MrPlotThickens
Tftc
ch 27 Chapter 27 - Ron's Choice IV
Star Of The Weasley Family
Book&Literature · MrPlotThickens
Good chapter I wonder when he is going to tell his family about Amelia
ch 26 Chapter 26 - Ron's Choice III
Star Of The Weasley Family
Book&Literature · MrPlotThickens
Hope he learns from this I guess
ch 21 Chapter 6. Training. Part 6.
Not the Last Airbender
Anime & Comics · Paracetam0l
Good chapter can’t wait to next one
ch 23 Having Fun //
Spider-Man of Earth 65
Anime & Comics · MrLarsBar
If he knew it was lobo why wait to transform?
ch 38 Raiden Vs The Main Man
Fate/DC Universe
Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669
When he gets back and raven move on
ch 33 Inner Pain
Fate/DC Universe
Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669
Him passing out a lot is starting to get annoying good chapter though.
ch 30 The Citadel
Fate/DC Universe
Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669
Good Chapter Please don’t let the mc tell everybody about the system and dungeons
ch 0 1 Chapter 8: Mini Timeskips Part 3
Bleach: Strongest Monarch
Anime & Comics · Rizzler007
Mc when he see ivo
ch 26 27th November 2011
Fate/DC Universe
Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh9669
Good chapter
ch 0 1 Chapter 4: Number One
Bleach: Strongest Monarch
Anime & Comics · Rizzler007
Good chapter
ch 50 Nude Colony III // Vixen, Vengeance & Miracle Molly
DC: GOTHAM'S REIGNER
Anime & Comics · MrLarsBar
The last couple chapters have been amazing especially the fights keep up the great work
ch 43 Sunrise
Spider-Man of Earth 65
Anime & Comics · MrLarsBar