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Paragon of Destruction · C24
1 day ago
Nice .. Arran in the process of making a life long friend .. (I hope) :D View More
Paragon of Destruction · C77
8 months ago
yay! Nice job Tom .. Amazing work reaching this far. A milestone indeed. Can't wait for Arran to grow in the shadowflame society. Do we have an ETA as to when you plan on starting the second volume? View More
Paragon of Destruction · C67
8 months ago

EricRasputin: Aii... I kinda think that the plot id progressing too fast. Arran is still a novice but he's already dealing with masters, grand masters and archmages ... Very different from normal novels where there is a kind of build up as the MC progresses.

Kinda not liking it but lets see where this ends up. Cant hate a book just for being different :P

Paragon of Destruction · C64
8 months ago
Aii... I kinda think that the plot id progressing too fast. Arran is still a novice but he's already dealing with masters, grand masters and archmages ... Very different from normal novels where there is a kind of build up as the MC progresses.

Kinda not liking it but lets see where this ends up. Cant hate a book just for being different :P View More
Paragon of Destruction · C64
8 months ago

TomVanDyke: Thanks for the comment, and thanks for sticking with the story from the start!

I'm definitely going to continue the story, although we're nearing the end of the first volume. Once I finish that, I'll need to take a (short) break, as I'm going on vacation with my girlfriend.

Regarding Arran's recent luck... he has been a bit lucky, hasn't he? I wonder if something will happen to mess with his good fortune ;)

Paragon of Destruction · C56
8 months ago
Glad you made it till here Tom ... It's been one hell of a ride and I plan on staying on. Hope you continue with this.

I feel like Arran is getting a bit lucky but not too much. Like he has all this wealth in his hands but he has no way to use them which was clearly shown in his months of struggle to learn the windblade ...

I like the balance ... Usually in stories like this there is always someone to guide the MC but for Arran he is really alone other than a few obscure helpers who make sure he doesnt die ....

I like it ... The story is progressing pretty well View More
Paragon of Destruction · C56
8 months ago
Oh! Finally some world background. I hope there is someone in the higer ranks of the academy that believes in arran to side with order instead of chaos. View More
Paragon of Destruction · C51
9 months ago
And a new arc begins .. You're doing a great job, author .. Keep at it :) View More
Paragon of Destruction · C46
9 months ago
Ah .. Young love ... View More
Paragon of Destruction · C35
9 months ago
Im just glad that this novel doesnt berate fatties like every other novel .. Good job author View More
Ancient Godly Monarch · C35
9 months ago
Nice ... A boy and a girl traveling and living together .. What could go wrong? ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) View More
Paragon of Destruction · C24
9 months ago
Oh yes ... Im liking where this is going. MC is going to have hard work transformative arc with a female mc beside(hopefully lol) It's going to be fun ... Hope you release more chapters per day :D View More
Paragon of Destruction · C23
10 months ago
uwotm8? Leave? :O View More
Paragon of Destruction · C22
10 months ago
Master Zhao is the effing G! View More
Paragon of Destruction · C19
10 months ago
Not that well I imagine. All he has is brute force but no finesse. But I'm interested to see how he survives this. View More

TomVanDyke: The latest chapter should give you an idea of how the MC currently measures up against real mages ;)

Paragon of Destruction · C16
10 months ago
Holy ****! It's about to go DOWN! View More
Paragon of Destruction · C18
10 months ago
Reading Status: C1015
It's cliche, it's OP, MC gets anything and everything he wants.

Sounds like a stupid novel. BUT I CAN'T STOP READING!

I like its clicheness, its OPness, and his stupidly amazing luck.

You'll definitely have a great time reading. View More
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God
10 months ago
Im getting that OP vibe from the MC right now lol View More
Paragon of Destruction · C16
10 months ago
I hope one day you move to 2 chapters a day. The story is progressing very well :) Keep it up :D View More
Paragon of Destruction · C14
10 months ago
Congratulations on the 1000th chapter. This is an amazing milestone in the webnovel community. View More
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C1000
10 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C1000
10 months ago

TomVanDyke: Thanks for the review!

You're definitely right that right now, how easily he adapts to being on the run is a bit of a plot hole. At the risk of giving a slight spoiler, however: a few chapters down the line, we'll learn a bit more about his background, and it will hopefully (partly) resolve that plot hole.

As for the world, there's definitely more background info about that on the way, but I wanted to avoid infodumping at the start of the novel.

Anyway, thanks again for the review, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it in the future :)

Paragon of Destruction
10 months ago
LMAO View More

Eternity_River: Ah, the famous Truck-kun’s younger brother Car-kun.

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing · C1
10 months ago

Eternity_River: Ah, the famous Truck-kun’s younger brother Car-kun.

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing · C1
10 months ago
Reading Status: C7
A very enjoyable novel.

The protagonist (Arran) has a sense of depth in him. The only shortcoming in his character is how he so easily adapts from being a country boy full of hopes and dream about being a mage to becoming a prey for the Academy. He very easily adapts to his current situation which is sort of a plot hole but I guess you can over look it because the other parts are pretty well written.

The world back ground hasn't yet been revealed which is completely fine. That can happen later on also.

I very much like the design of his enigmatic helper. Full of mysteries. O hope he turns out to be a delight in the future.

The author did say daily updates, so I look forward to this novels future. View More
Paragon of Destruction
10 months ago
Reading Status: C6
This novel is a rip off of The World Online.

I mean yeah there are differences, but if you consider the bigger picture, this novel is the same as The World Online.

I just began this novel and it is already too OP for me. Generally, I love OP MC's .. But this is the first novel I'm complaining about the OPness.

He gets Bai Qi and Li Si at the beginning itself. I hoped to see the MC grow and eventually gain those legendary characters. But no. He gets it at the first.

I will continue reading this because I am currently out of kingdom building novels. I hope it gets better. View More
The Lord’s Empire
10 months ago
Dude .. This is too OP .. He got Bai Qi and Li Si in the beginning. I mean I know he's king and all but I expected him to find them at later stage .. but still this is fun too :P View More
The Lord’s Empire · C3
10 months ago
You have done amazing work my friend. I throughly enjoy your story and the dedication you've put into it.
I was willing to read your novel despite its many flaws which shows just how good it is. I will contact you soon :) View More

phamtonbullet: Hello friend, I wanted to thank you for the help, yeah I admit that my grammar sucks but I tries to improve everyday, I fail though :(
XD, Anyway, if you want to help with the novel and u have the time, you are more than welcome.

Write me to this email : TheSupremeSovereignSystem@hotmail.com
Bye bye~

The supreme sovereign system
10 months ago
Author. I'll proofread and edit your novel for free. It's becoming hard to read. Please contact me. I'll only take a day or two to make your novel grammatically and structurally correct. I'm here. Pls contact. View More

phamtonbullet: Hello, everyone, I am the author of The supreme sovereign system, phamtonbullet, I just wanted to say a few things , believe me I am doing this just to express my opinion and not to shamelessly add reviews to the novel :v , so here we go:

1) I know that my nick name is writing wrong, it should be phantombullet but It was already taken, uwu.

2) I always read your comments my beloved readers, every time that you post a commend in any chapter, I read it. I know a few of you who always thanks me for the chapter, I really, really appreciate it.

3) As you may already notice, I have problems with the grammar , I am really sorry about that, I always feel bad about this, I am planning to take a few days to edit all my past chapters (1-25). I am using a few grammars correctos, and I am trying to find someone to be my proofreader(this was a suggestion from you) , in conclusion , I will do my best to give all of you a writing quality that you deserved.

3) As I was saying, I always read your commends, I know a lot of people have been complaining about the fact that I called Artemis, Artemisa. Well, the thing is this, I have ALWAYS called her by that name xD . I planned to leave it that way, however, to give you a better time in reading the novel, I changed to Artemis in chapter 30 and it will stay that way from now on.

4) This novel will be a long one, The adventures of Alfonso are just beginning, some of you have asked if Alfonso will get superpower and fight by himself, well, I won't spoil you, so I won't answer, I will only say that Alfonso would have to use his head more than his muscles...(he is crippled anyway, :v)

5) I will now(02/07/2018) put a bonus chapter system, however , to have them, I will have to shamelessly ask for your votes(spirit stones) , this bonus chapters will be given depending on what position we ended on the week:

- Ranked between 90-80 : 1 bonus chapter
- Ranked between 70-60 : 2 bonus chapters
- Ranked between 50-40 : 3 bonus chapters

I will stop there, lets be honest, we have a long way to get to further positions, when this novel consolidates itself better , I will do another system of bonus chapters.

6) I usually post 1 chapter per day.

7) Finally, I want to thank you all of you who follow the adventures of Alfonso, please keep looking forward for it! And for the ones who are just reading reviews, what are you waiting for?

Alfonso Lockheart command you! Read it!

The supreme sovereign system
10 months ago
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