You taking a break levelgap07?
ch 41 The Ultimate Mobile System
Urban · Yeye0900
Things are getting pretty exciting now that the mc can do cultivation and great job levelgap07 on the improvements. Thanks for the chapter.
ch 41 The Ultimate Mobile System
Urban · Yeye0900
Thanks for the chapter
ch 40 Upgrading Money, Mines, and Woods
Urban · Yeye0900
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 39 They won't let this go
Urban · Yeye0900
Thanks for the chapter
ch 38 Overwhelming Gesture of Friendship
Urban · Yeye0900
Try using ‘has’ instead of ‘have’, like For example, instead of ‘he have a lot of points on the system.’ It’s ‘he has a lot points on the system.’ Hope this helps out and thanks for the chapter
Also, it didn't cost him anything. He have a lot of points on his systems so he don't have to worry at all.
Urban · Yeye0900
Although the quality has dropped a bit in terms of grammar and choice of words from chapter 35-36, they are still very good in terms of events that has lead it to be where we are now. I very much do enjoy this novel and I hope you improve as the chapters go on. Thanks for the chapter.
ch 36 The Confused Brigg
Urban · Yeye0900
Thanks for the chapter
ch 35 Investigating the Outpost
Urban · Yeye0900
So Neil, oh boy where do I start… Even though he has upgraded every organ in his body, he is still dumb let’s be real. He also doesn’t know how valunable food is in the apocalypse and gives it away like candy in exchange for the local currency which isn’t worth it if he did research on their camp.
ch 34 The Expedition Party
Urban · Yeye0900
Thanks for the chapter
ch 32 The Status of this World
Urban · Yeye0900
Thanks for the chapter
ch 31 Supreme Functions
Urban · Yeye0900
Keep up the great work [img=update]
ch 26 Superior System
Urban · Yeye0900
10/10 in my opinion. This novel is a masterpiece for what it is as who ever reads it become addicted; same for me. The author uses great grammar, which is displayed in each chapter and doesn’t make the MC actions repetitive. Give it a try.
GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
Urban · Lordflash