a crackish hp fic, decent enough story-line, could be serious with some effort and twists but overall a story with good ideas and a proper mix of drama/dialogue and storytelling/narrative.
Book&Literature · Blacklares
The story seems pushed, but in a way that makes it almost easier to understand and read without needing to take a break from it. I wouldn't have minded a bit more interaction and dramatization between characters, and i like how the character development had been thoughts and points of view and not just narrative. I would read more of this author, there were a few mistakes in words and grammar that saw but nothing worth nitpicking over.
Book&Literature · manny0101
Read the finished story, a good rounded work with an OC as a the MC. It has a good bit of details, presents a rather honest human Dumbledore, and while it has a bit of a power wank for the MC at times, and follows a bit too close to cannon at others, overall a really good story with a significant character development and new ideas that were not part of cannon, things i love to read in new fanfics.
Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Webnovel
a crackish hp fic, decent enough story-line, could be serious with some effort and twists but overall a story with good ideas and a proper mix of drama/dialogue and storytelling/narrative.
Konrad’s adventures in the multiverse. Vol 1
Book&Literature · Blacklares