So, one of the priests brought Eragon's flame and it was used as a catalyst. The problem here is we have zero foreshadowing, and nothing to hint it was his flame. It's a huge jump to just think we will get it, directly. I enjoyed the story so far and I will still continue to read it as you are a good writer but here you made a mistake. it can easily be arranged if you modify the last chapter. Write with a little more details. let Ciri ask her sister since when she knew how to do magic or something like that. She only has to respond, it's not mine and we will easily get it. And even then you should have shown another person perform the magie and show how their flame had different color. We will then knew that Eragon's flame is a special golden one.
ch 151 Yo chill
Book&Literature · Pretending_Author
The theory of why witches are more powerful make absolutely no sense at all.
ch 18 Delving into Magic!
Harry Potter: Ero World
Book&Literature · light_novel_addict