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Commented ...which startled him... That is the better sentence construction.
A loud sound of the door slamming was heard by him, and which made him startled, and now his attention was in the door.
My Life As Tadano
Anime & Comics · Charlottes
...and brought his attention to the door... Or something like that. Repeated use of 'and' is annoying to read.
A loud sound of the door slamming was heard by him, and which made him startled, and now his attention was in the door.
My Life As Tadano
Anime & Comics · Charlottes