Dubious_Royal - Profile

Good story, I will continue reading. As of the latest chapter when making this review there is a few things that bother me. Sometimes the conversations seem a little robotic. They kinda use too many words and disclaimers to say things instead of talking in a more casual and natural way. It's only slightly off putting and doesn't ruin the enjoyment for me. The flow of the romance is kind of odd. There is some clear favoritism for one heroine despite being the third recognized romance by tenku. He's kind of hypocritical on his stance towards romance. He is suppose to not want to be distracted by it until he saves his sister. Then he steps back and decides that he'll accept the feels of about 3 of them but not fully reciprocate until he reaches his goal. The problem is that he goes on to all but fuck one with a promise to do so regularly while trying to keep it a secret so he doesn't have to do it with the others. This ultimately just makes me feel really bad for the other two. Also, Why does setsuka seem to be add strong as wang? It doesn't make sense to me. As far as I know setsuka can only use a realizer's power while Wang can use realizer's power and cultivation. Shouldn't Wang be stronger? This goes to why I think the author favors setsuka more than the rest. But, I still enjoy reading. I just hope the author balances out the affection a bit at least with those recognized by tenku, so it doesn't seem so unfairly lopsided. Personally, I feel like Wang deserves more attention. There's just more meaningful interaction there to me.