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I assume you mean "his safety belt" here, "his security's belt" would be haru tightening the security guard's belt.
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BROKEN FLOWER ( BL )
LGBT+ · WndyButter
well even if your writing has a few very small mistakes, your writing is still superb, which vastly overshadows any nitpick about your grammar. although, the easiest way fix those is to write your story in Microsoft Word with grammarly installed. alternatively you can install thr grammarly plugin for your browser and it may work directly on this site. can't wait to read the rest or your story, good luck 🥰
ch 0 3 2 : The SS Club
BROKEN FLOWER ( BL )
LGBT+ · WndyButter
author are you from Asia by any chance? 😅 usually nobody in the west thinks 6' is really tall
ch 0 8 7 : Ogata Akihito
BROKEN FLOWER ( BL )
LGBT+ · WndyButter
this is very spicy😳
ch 0 7 6 : Powerful [ R18 ]
BROKEN FLOWER ( BL )
LGBT+ · WndyButter
honestly can't spot a single mistake in any of your writing, awesome work
ch 0 3 2 : The SS Club
BROKEN FLOWER ( BL )
LGBT+ · WndyButter
huh, poor alphas, always having to use condoms
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so just wondering, are omegas fertile all the time In your AU? or are the condoms just for easier clean up? I can't imagine any alpha would willingly use a condom unless there was a real risk, not just inconvenience, but then again Lionel is exceedingly considerate.
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so I assume Lionel's pheromones affected Kaito because they're not bonded/mated yet?
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oh good hear I go again, re reading this absolutely deadly roller coaster of emotions 😅😁
ch 0 1 Vol. 1 The Broken Blue doll
My Alpha Girlfriend (Omegaverse)
LGBT+ · Yue080
there's nothing socially acceptable about the cuddle puddles these guys regularly have, why they would start caring now is beyond me 😆
I end up sitting crosslegged in between Virgil and Dale, it's not really surprising considering they've been sticking as close as socially acceptable to me.
Becoming the Luna (bl)
LGBT+ · Aryna_Stan
I'd be surprised if she wasn't apprehensive about him going into the forest, considering what happened the last two times
She grumpily agrees which is a little strange because she had never minded before even when I chose to go all the way to the creek all by myself, but I pay it no mind.
Becoming the Luna (bl)
LGBT+ · Aryna_Stan
Nicole is a witch isn't she?
ch 84 ~°~Chapter Eighty-four~°~
Becoming the Luna (bl)
LGBT+ · Aryna_Stan
wooo finally an update! 😄
ch 95 "I'm not a pervert"
He Hates Me, He Loves Me Not
LGBT+ · 99blueroses
a lot of gaslighting going on in this novel so far
"Just Elise being her nutty self," Shana reassures me, a smug smirk on her face.
Becoming the Luna (bl)
LGBT+ · Aryna_Stan
but he is complaining, that's exactly what he is doing 😂
"Your name's too uncool. Who the heck made a name such as Drane." I say, speaking the truth. Let's admit it, Drane is not a cool name. Not now, not ever. But I am not complaining.
[BL] DNA DILEMMA: Caught in Someone else's Mess!
LGBT+ · miyobiya
no worries, you and the author's grammar, structure and editing is already as close to perfect as can be expected of something you get no pay for. keep up the good work! 🥰
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Well I can't give you to many of my personal ideas or I'll have nothing novel left for my own books😅, but one of my favourites that I read in another book is that alpha children are bitters and will especially bite other omega children and their mother.
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never mind lol, I realised right after posting this that the info dump chapter exists now and I got my answers there 😅
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this is some stellar writing
He started crying, reaching for something with his hand. It was so dark. And the voices around were too loud. He needed light, he needed to touch something real, because now, he wasn't sure if he was still dreaming, if the voices were in his head or if they were somewhere in the dark, watching him, ready to assault him and repeat these horrible acts again.
BROKEN FLOWER ( BL )
LGBT+ · WndyButter