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Mr_Forgefire

Mr_Forgefire

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2018-12-03 Joined United States

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Your magical words dont work on me wizard, I'm too stupid.

Gravity did not pull them down, liquid offered a foothold and the deep waters refused to swallow them.

The tale of Sasuke Uchiha

The tale of Sasuke Uchiha

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

Mr_Forgefire
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Replied to blasian391

Also Lady Nagant with air walk and rifle.

Which leads me to believe that to have multiple quirks I must have an extremely robust and strong physique. I have been taking steps to ensure that like regularly expelling impurities from my body. I have also reconstructed my body to be suitable for martial arts.

Nano in MHA

Nano in MHA

Anime & Comics · ChillPixel369

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No matter what this review states, keep writing and getting better, we cant be perfect. -REVIEW- I will say that for the most part this is one, if not the best, beginning for an mha fanfic on the site. Good execution, no needless padding of words, nothing unnecessary, and it's actually believable. No butt pulls out of nowhere or simple "since im smart" moments where very important things are glossed over. Honestly, 9/10 for the childhood arc alone. However, that rating falls when we get to UA. I have never understood the reason why in most mha fanfics everyone has a hate boner for Midoriya. Yeah he is spineless, yes he did nothing to train to be a hero, yes he gets no bitches (lol). But for the love of god he is 14. I get tired of 20+ year olds or whatever talking down to a literal kid as if he was supposed to have his life figured out by 14. I wanted to be a fireman at that age, yet you didnt see me running through fire, carrying fake bodies, and studying chemistry. That makes the rating drop by a bit, because at this point it becomes a push and pull of "I hate Midoriya" to "I need to help him so he can help me later" to "no, this my own story, fuck him" to "he needs to mature faster if canon changes" to etc etc. It is exhausting, would rather you kill him and be done with it, or be his friend and dont be overly helpful to the point of Being a slave. Pick a side and stick with it. Next, I can see the cracks of the story appearing. You want to keep canon the same, but at the same time ellude to it changing, then have the MC do things to keep it the same. The second (spoiler) Chisaki was killed canon was scrapped, please dont make it a carbon copy of the source material, thousands of those already exist. It seems like After the childhood arc the story feels lost, no real direction, and not in a mysterious way either. Annoying if anything. However. I hope you continue to write, and this is coming from someone who writes mha fanfics and gave up because of how hard it was to make it work, so don't give up 👍🏽

Mr_Forgefire
Replied to CruelReality

That's the point

"Did I ask for your worthless advice, you angry Pomeranian. Go bark somewhere else" Izuku savagely replies to him.

Nano in MHA

Nano in MHA

Anime & Comics · ChillPixel369

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Replied to Injustice

Two is the natural limit stated in the manga. Just how the past users of one for all could have one quirk plus the stockpiling one. However, it shortens their lifespan but they at least are not nomu like.

Which leads me to believe that to have multiple quirks I must have an extremely robust and strong physique. I have been taking steps to ensure that like regularly expelling impurities from my body. I have also reconstructed my body to be suitable for martial arts.

Nano in MHA

Nano in MHA

Anime & Comics · ChillPixel369

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Replied to antmanFN

I wonder how kicking him in the gut helps him control his quirk🤔

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Replied to Immortal_Panda

Fr

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Replied to Zion_Rainey_2516

Thank you, all the villains mc's just blend together and I cant remember a single one. The only goody two shoes MC's I usually see are honestly the best. Naruto, Luffy, Goku, etc. dont see why people say and think they dont work, because they do.

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Replied to Mr_Night

Yes, only in single burst, equivalent to 8% of ONE FOR ALL.

Kenshi gritted his teeth, blood drawn but he thankfully couldn't feel the pain as he took away his sense of touch, allowing himself to exceed human limits with his body as he blurred forward.

MHA: Will of an Underground Hero

MHA: Will of an Underground Hero

Anime & Comics · Mr_Forgefire

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Replied to Coldman

Of course, it's just a conversation, you showed respect so I will. I will also take into account your concerns and see if I can make it more realistic.

Kenshi gritted his teeth, blood drawn but he thankfully couldn't feel the pain as he took away his sense of touch, allowing himself to exceed human limits with his body as he blurred forward.

MHA: Will of an Underground Hero

MHA: Will of an Underground Hero

Anime & Comics · Mr_Forgefire

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"Some may have romanticized life in the Victorian Era but the reality is often disappointing," Poul finished. "Thinking all this makes me miss the modern world, specifically the hygiene. Ahh…I hope everything is just a dream."

Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World

Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World

History · SorryImJustDiamond

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