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He should recreate DCU movies like Kevin Feige. Ian can be little more confident and ambitious. At the beginning he already had a few million in the bank. Then he’s proven his talent as a director with a treasure trove of more stories to steal from. Now he should create his own legacy, even if it fails he won’t go bankrupt.

Nobody is going to steal a movie script from an amateur screenwriter.

This sounds like a running gag that I won’t mention anymore. I feel like the MC could be multibillionaire and still get made fun of. It was funny at first, but now its just a go to comeback everytime Ian makes them at a loss for words.

And don’t say Ian is being rude. This problem won’t ever go away. If Ian had suggested to act in their softcore p%rn movies Mason would’ve said yes without thinking too much. Screenwriting, directing, being responsible? Mason can’t imagine it, he probably thinks Ian pranking him.

This. Ian should just hire a whole new team and cultivate new relationships.

The difference between confidence and arrogance is ability. The MC can be arrogant but I hope he doesn’t become careless. His foresight is the only thing that makes him special.

Imo neither of them are strong. Both the maid and Mason are only working for Ian due to nostalgia about his father. Except Ian is not his father. His father is gone and any attempt to explain that will be met with suspicion, dissapointment, and unrealistic expectations. Ian needs to prove himself first before he can make friends.

I think its interesting. Unlike the First Hokage who was strong enough to save everybody, the Third Hokage is much more of a politician. Relying on checks and balances to lead the village.

It’s because their talent held them back that they took Eight gates to the limit. Anybody with actual talent would’ve used a jutsu that wasn’t so self destructive and as difficult to train.

All ninjas in Konoha are brainwashed. Brainwashed to give up their lives, work hard even with little pay, to stay loyal to the village, and to respect the Hokage. Which are those are bad advice? There’s nothing wrong with having values.

Yeah i think the System should only exist to give the MC an edge in their new world so they don’t die too early. Give the MC something to focus on and have faith in. Or they will be plagued with anxiety and drop the chain at the critical moment. There’s no need for a multitude of OP powers. Any ambitious character can grow to be powerful like Kabuto because most characters in the show become complacent.

Nitpicking is saying all of the characters in this story are very bland. No constructive criticism, just a straight diss saying “Do Better”. Aiden getting too absorbed in his acting is a real problem he would logically have in his career. There’s more to being an actor than just acting skills.

He’s a bottom agent. Meaning he’s overworked, stressed, cynical, so yes he takes out his frustration on people who can’t retaliate. Then when the MC gets revenge later he will try to morally kidnap him or scream about how ruthless he is.

It would be cliche if he won. It’s common in power up novels where the MC gets too powerful the novel is about to end.

The popular quote is “Hard Work pays off”. Well it literally pays off for him, so Aiden shouldn’t freak out.

I hope he comes up with some amazing that makes it all more clear his singing is subpar.

This. I feel like neither of them are stable enough for a relationship. Not to mention maturity.

Nobody else can see the aura except him. Like clothes being ripped off in Food Wars, they aren’t actually getting naked.

I think its fine. I’ve read food novels, art novels, etc. A decent story is whats important.

This. Most importantly I hope the MC progresses. Either singing skills or connections, or other. Winning is optional.