Webnovel Author: WiseStratos - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Oh yeah that, I kinda noticed that I have had a hard time writing about emotions or character of each person in the fanfic, which was one of the reasons I listed on this particular chapter that’s making me hold up on updating frequently, found in the Authors Note. Although you do have to note that most characters in these anime verse are not necessarily… the most sane characters, not even the ones from Grisaia, so I just thought it matches to Ryoba Aishi in the game you know. Heck in Grisaia, the game or novel it was even noted that Yuuji had intercourse with his mother at a young tender age that sort of had an influence on Kazuki to do something similar. But oh well, you do you I guess. Btw this is the place I got the example for Grisaia involving Yuuji and her mother which is also noted in the Wiki fandom.

Well… It’s true that a 2 year old killing someone is a bit over the top, but I kinda had a few consideration on his… I guess past before reincarnation which accounts for why he felt normal killing someone, being so apathetic, as well as charm that reaches out to all ages. Not to mention, the reasons behind the system. That’s all I could tell you to be honest other than everything will build up to my thought out plot in the future maybe after many many unknown chapter. And as for this particular chapter, it’s not necessarily getting a women not of his age, rather that his sense of presence or “aura” gives a comforting feeling that she can’t help but want to get closer, so it hasn’t reach the level of love, but just something that helps Yūna and him easily establish a sort of connection or relationship of some sort akin to friendship. As for the matter of being a lover, well who knows~~ Anyways it’s another build up to a future plot development. I do kind of agree that the previous before rewrite had some advantages, but I started having many writers block as well as plot holes that goes against Hiroto’s past in my mind, so I dropped that development. In addition to being quite inexperienced that time where I couldn’t capture everyone’s character well, including Hiroto, messing everything up which was another reason for the rewrite. That’s kinda all the hints I could give you, before it turns into an absolute spoiler.

Just for a reference of what the man that Yūna bumped into looked like in the manga of Happy Sugar Life!:

There are reasons why his age is so young to be honest that I’ve planned. I also wanted for it to be aligned a bit with reality, adding logic in the play. If you’re really curious why— Find out on the next chapter of Dragon Ba… I mean next chapter, you’ll see why his age progression is like this.