Genedrag - Profile

My complaint about the reason for him knowing a bunch of martial arts and being at Chiba Academy was there not being an explanation. My complaint about skills from tensura wasn't him getting some it was getting multiple along with gluttony which is an Ultimate NOT unique lv skill it composed of multiple unique skills evolved and fused together from Rimaru growing stronger and absorbing multiple unique skills from defeated foes. And you said in the description he won't be op from the beginning but in the first 10 chapters he's immortal and gets gluttony an ultimate lv skill that can devower a herrscher in seconds even when they try to fight back because let's be honest herrscher are too stupid to understand or use the full power of there ability. And in chapter 2 he talks about being converted into a mantis by the system not just giving adaptability and the ability to absorb honkai/abilities which is already stupidity strong and after reading ch 11 I read the chapter titles and around chapter 21 he already has the powers of a herrscher. I get this is your first story and it says it's supposed to be a power fantasy but it only works if (1 he is op from the beginning) or (2 there is a slow but steady build up of power.) not start out weak then in 20 chapters be nearly unbeatable except by God lv opponents who can one shot planets or those with the ability to just bend reality over and make it take it up the but.

The story has barely even started yet the MC already is both immortal and has op skills that make him Invincible. Gluttony is an ultimate lv skill that the mc shouldn't be able to even possess right now it can be used to devower an entire Honkai eruption the fact he knows "multiple" martial arts as an orphan and was able to enter Chiba Academy that is supported to be a prestigious school for the rich and politically powerful that was already a plot hole. And world travel ticket should be more expensive at the very least 1000 points and the all worlds compatibility should be worth at least 10,000 points if it was a singal world compatability it should be atleast 100 points. There's no build up no growth your just buffing a lv 1 character until his stats are max while sometimes a op character is entertaining I was expecting something at least a little series not grabbing a bunch of op skills that should make him Invincible he already was a mantis with op potential beyond human why would he need a new body his should already be better than any human except maybe a demigod. The story just started he hasn't even had the first encounter in his own world or a chat room mission but he can all ready world hop and why would he reincarnate again into tensura he didn't die he doesn't need a new body he should just appear on the world and be given 1 to 3 normal skills and 1 unique skill not multiple unique and an ultimate skill like Gluttony. And I don't know if you know but the immortality from having a code means he himself cannot possess a gease a gease is created by forming a contract with someone possessing a code if the contract is deemed fulfilled the recipient lose there gease but gain the code/immortality from the contractor.

Until this chapter it was a good story this chapter killed it for me.

This story is becoming boring and predictable the fact he has advanced conqueror's haki which should be able to knock out anything on the first 30 floors that's alive but it's nerfed to not work on anything is just sad and the templet system should have given him Fujitora's sword skill and experience not just his abilities.

He seemed like one when it all started so I'm going to assume he was.

You gave an mc god power in the first two chapters no build up no meaningful growth or reason for what he did just god mod all to put his d in crazy you should change the symptoms on the first line to op crack wish fulfillment.

The mc went from a normal person to and insane genocidal monster in 1 chapter all for a girl well this is quickly becoming a COMPLETE LETDOWN.

With the first chapter you killed my desire to read your story with the waifu ticket congratulations.

Your story is trash.

I can already see where this trash story is going in the trash.

The OCMC's martial spirits are a complete waste all eye techniques/abilities can be recreated separately or bought from the store and the reality marble sounds like unlimited blade works fused with creation of all things it would have been better to give him the reality gauntlet if you just wanted him over powered.